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15 Feb 2016 01:56 - 15 Feb 2016 01:58 #46451 by Revan
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erikphandel wrote: Hey guys,

New story is up erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/Orisha-589722708

This one is a bit slow, but it's a build up to a more sexy story that follows this one

Another interesting addition. Seems Mike is getting a lot less careful with his gift after he freaked out over enhancing Layla more or less against his will.
This time it appears to have worked out well but he acted rashly empowering a stranger that had some pretty powerful emotions and memories bottled up. It's a matter of time before he creates his first villainess if he keeps this up (something I'd enjoy seeing I might add :D ).
Hopefully we'll get more chapters soon since I really like the idea of a guy's cum giving girls superpowers!
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15 Feb 2016 04:40 #46453 by erikphandel
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Next story definetly involves a new supervillan, just haven't decided how it will happen yet. I've been juggling two ideas in my head, mentally fleshing them out. Gonna take a bit longer though.

Glad so many people are enjoying this. I understand the characters are a bit inconsistent but I write these pretty much on the fly, with only grammatical correction afterwards, so sorry for that :P
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28 Mar 2016 22:31 #47030 by erikphandel
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erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/Irresistib...ry%3Aerikhandel&qo=0 new chapter is up! Hope you guys enjoy it
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29 Mar 2016 21:11 #47054 by Agent00Soul
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Very sexy stories! What a gift....
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28 Sep 2016 22:05 #50471 by erikphandel
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Lots of stories since I last shilled my DA here. You can check the latest here erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/The-Witch-636301965 and be sure to read the ones before that if you haven't already. I hope you enjoy them!
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28 Sep 2016 23:43 #50474 by AuGoose
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Heh. I am entertained :). And the model is ridiculously hot. Win-win-win. :)
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29 Sep 2016 00:34 #50475 by erikphandel
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Means a lot to me that you are enjoying since I am a big fan of your stories

And I do have a knack for finding hot models for my characters, it seems

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29 Sep 2016 23:58 #50497 by Revan
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I'm always happy to see updates on your DA page. And your latest entry adds a whole new dynamic so good addition!
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04 Oct 2016 16:29 #50550 by erikphandel
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erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/The-Goddes...ew=10%253A1475594860 new chapter up on my DA. Last bit of the Dominatrix story for now. This one is extremely NSFW so be careful. Hope you have a good time reading it!
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08 Oct 2016 20:00 #50591 by AuGoose
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Had some time so was finally able to sit down and read more of these (I jumped on at The Witch). Good fun all the way around and some tasty sexy sequences. Left me thinking about possible future encounters and other fun twists and turns even hours later, so the setting definitely clicked for me. There's one or two places where you get some duplication/reuse of phrases or descriptions that seem accidental and are a little distracting ("cocktail" "juices evaporated") but otherwise seems quite sound from the technical/construction aspect. Easy to read. If you like, I can send you a more detailed critique/proofread privately.

Definitely looking forward to more.
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09 Oct 2016 01:32 #50593 by erikphandel
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I would love to have a more detailed critique. Whenever you can, please do!

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09 Oct 2016 22:22 #50608 by erikphandel
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erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/Lust-desire-and-greed-638408051 new chapter up! Please give me some feedback. Do you prefer short or longer stories? Been writing a lot shorter lately
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02 Dec 2016 18:53 #51501 by erikphandel
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erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/Worship-648877091 new chapter is up on my DA! Also it would really help if you guys answer the question in my profile page
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02 Dec 2016 20:25 #51505 by AuGoose
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Repeated applications of Mike enhance the core power set. One has to wonder if repeated applications of Henry enhance whatever he gave them or start triggering additional abilities. Depth vs. breadth.

Fun stuff. Looking forward to more. I might prefer slightly longer, but I know that itch to publish something good instead of drag it out hoping for something perfect...
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02 Dec 2016 22:08 #51507 by erikphandel
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AuGoose wrote: Repeated applications of Mike enhance the core power set. One has to wonder if repeated applications of Henry enhance whatever he gave them or start triggering additional abilities. Depth vs. breadth.

Fun stuff. Looking forward to more. I might prefer slightly longer, but I know that itch to publish something good instead of drag it out hoping for something perfect...


This one was supposed to be a way longer story, but since I haven't plublished anything in a while, I decided to publish it as soon as I got a good ending. But since all my stories have three or four sequences, in the end it's only one big story with several chapters

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02 Dec 2016 22:53 #51509 by Woodclaw
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AuGoose wrote: Repeated applications of Mike enhance the core power set. One has to wonder if repeated applications of Henry enhance whatever he gave them or start triggering additional abilities. Depth vs. breadth.


I think this might be a pretty good frame of reference for future installments and to create an interesting level of asymmetry between the characters, allowing for a more varied interplay.

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27 Jan 2017 19:50 #52297 by erikphandel
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New chapter out. Sorry for the delay, and I hope you enjoy it!
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16 Feb 2017 18:00 - 16 Feb 2017 18:46 #52582 by AuGoose
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Well, I for one welcome our new Lauren Overlord :).

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16 Feb 2017 18:06 #52583 by erikphandel
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Oh shit now this is so awesome <3 Thanks a lot AuGoose I really appreciate it
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17 Feb 2017 01:49 #52589 by ong76win2
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Wow! Great series! Be waiting for more!
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