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If you want to see the full extent of Lauren's powers, this is the chapter. Hope you guys enjoy it!
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Expect a really different pace on the story, but it's only on this one. I'm planning lot's of superheroine fighting on the next one
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erikphandel wrote: I have no idea what you're talking about but yeah Theresa May seems pretty hellbent on Brexit tbqh
I think he means the events in the previous chapter are still going on in in the background while we cut to a different part of the world.
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dude did I just forgot what I had written what the fuck
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New chapter up! Getting back to the main story on the next one. Please tell me what you think of this one
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Pepper wrote: Nothing new here in a while. Hope the story hasn't run out of steam.
More like I've run out of steam :c but I'm glad to know there are people still interested. I have a lot planned out in my head, it's just a matter of typing it
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Definitely let us know when more arrives!
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erikphandel wrote:
Pepper wrote: Nothing new here in a while. Hope the story hasn't run out of steam.
More like I've run out of steam :c but I'm glad to know there are people still interested. I have a lot planned out in my head, it's just a matter of typing it
Definitely still interested, so let's hope you'll find your second wind!
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New chapter up! Hope you guys enjoy it. Make sure to let me know what you think here or in the DA comments
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I noticed there was no picture in this one, except for the costume. Makes sense, since there's not a new female character to introduce, but it did lend something to previous chapters. You have very good taste.
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This is the second to last chapter in the Lauren storyline. After this storyline ends, we're back to usual, normal superheroics
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AuGoose wrote: Nice. Very interested in seeing the outcome for God- er, Holly. Seem thing, I guess .
At this point one should wonder if spelling her name with to "Ls" is correct.
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Woohoo!
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That was nice, thanks for sharing!erikphandel wrote: I have finished the last chapter of Lauren's arc erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/The-Marvel...e-Universe-720334145
Woohoo!
Still, once again there is that paradox. When I want a heroine to be utterly invincible, as soon as she is, the story is not going to be fun any more (metaphorically, it's those eons in vacuum). Any interesting twist may come only with an obstacle, but what could it be, if I want her to be invincible? Paradox
Has there been any discussion on that? Does anyone have any ideas about coming out of this? Does "utterly invincible" mean "no plot" as soon as everyone's aware she's like that?
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erikphandel wrote: I think there is a kind of story to be told with a omnipotent heroine, as Jasmine from EnchantedErotica has shown. But it's not the kind of story I, personally, want to tell, so I chose to dial it all back after the fun is done
In many ways, I think that a omnipotent character lend itself better to single episode comedy, because it's so damn difficult to build tension around her.
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