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The honking of geese (a notebook)

04 Jul 2016 14:32 - 08 Jul 2016 23:51 #48968 by AuGoose
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Ravens_ghost wrote: I'm a lurker at heart, but can the goddess give us more of that last snip-it, please.


Honestly, few things are more effective at getting a goddess to linger than asking her to :blush:.

Also as a heads up, depending on when you read it there are some substantial changes to part 1 including an additional character (Ella) being introduced who you'll see more of later.

Fifteen Minutes of Fame (part 2)
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06 Jul 2016 14:51 - 08 Jul 2016 23:53 #48993 by AuGoose
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To my enduring astonishment, 15 Minutes of Fame is complete (though not done). Every crucial plot point covered, every bridge between scenes built. Which is a huge relief because so often I have a beginning, and ending, and a whole box of parts that don't quite shuffle into neat rows. My muse was feeling unusually through.

Part I and II have some added body now, and in particular it might be worthwhile to review part I. Because I tend to do so much focused editing after posting a chunk I'm gonna continue to break the story down into bite sized pieces for your reading and to limit and direct my screaming 'goddam typos!' at it :). Plus I think Katie would approve.

We return to your program, already in progress...

Fifteen Minutes of Fame (part 3)
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06 Jul 2016 15:44 #48994 by LustMonster
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Every breath was held--


Including MINE, dammit!

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Next part please!
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07 Jul 2016 00:19 #48996 by www1969
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This is terrific.
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07 Jul 2016 15:28 #49011 by lojack
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You are a bad man. A very very bad man! :P

But, props for the #Dickstarter hashtag, I laughed at that one! :laugh:

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07 Jul 2016 19:36 - 10 Jul 2016 12:23 #49019 by AuGoose
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lojack wrote: You are a bad man. A very very bad man! :P


Katie made me do it :whistle: . Though honestly you should cherish the moment: it won't be nearly as thrilling when all the parts are assembled for the library.

But, props for the #Dickstarter hashtag, I laughed at that one! :laugh:


Credit for that pun actually goes to LustMonster, who's served as a very insightful focus group for KIBCs programming :).

I've been wrestling with some doubts about the remainder of the story, trying to find the sweet spot between some of my own proclivities and what'll play best to the larger audience (a dilemma I only resolved about an hour ago). Looking ahead, there's also increasing elements of plot and drama so folks looking for a pure fap-tastic ride might be a little disappointed.

LustMonster wrote:

Every breath was held--


Including MINE, dammit!


1... 2... 3... And breathe...

Fifteen Minutes of Fame (part 4)
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07 Jul 2016 20:16 #49020 by LustMonster
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1... 2... 3... And breathe...


WHEW!!!!!

Most excellent!

Poor weatherman -- IT'S ARMAGEDDON FOR THE BAY AREA!!

Credit for that pun actually goes to LustMonster


Returning the favor for his awesome "Hell's barbecue sauce", making its icky appearance in my "Expedition Part 4" story.

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08 Jul 2016 14:24 #49025 by jumperprime
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Whoa. 150 million? At this point, a fight between the SF Angel and Super Katie will be like an ordinary mortal vs. Supergirl with the SF Angel shattering her own hand punching Super Katie's unprecedented goddess abs.

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08 Jul 2016 15:35 #49026 by lojack
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That escalated quickly! She does only have five minutes and we have to be running out of time here, especially after the affiliate catch-up and the weather segment. I'm curious how she squeezes the last drops out and get to her final form. (I'm guessing the self mod ability goes away at the end of the five minutes, but the rest are hers to keep- a lifetime supply of powers, a copy of the home game, and Rice-a-Roni®, The San Francisco Treat®)

The big question isn't actually about her, but rather what is the entity getting out of this? It obviously had a reason to make the Angel the way it did, so it was getting something out of that arrangement. (Sexual energy sustains it?) Plus it doubted the million mark, and must be stuffed or even soaking in whatever it is getting at 150x and rising from that. Heck, she was squirming in her seat with excitement/desire when she saw the Angel lift ~2.5 tons of car/guys overhead, and she can do that feat now with a rather large train engine, with more to come.

Oh, and something tells me that ORCA is going to have much more than a handful when they come to have a chat with Katie. :)

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08 Jul 2016 15:56 #49027 by jumperprime
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lojack wrote: The big question isn't actually about her, but rather what is the entity getting out of this? It obviously had a reason to make the Angel the way it did, so it was getting something out of that arrangement. (Sexual energy sustains it?) Plus it doubted the million mark, and must be stuffed or even soaking in whatever it is getting at 150x and rising from that. Heck, she was squirming in her seat with excitement/desire when she saw the Angel lift ~2.5 tons of car/guys overhead, and she can do that feat now with a rather large train engine, with more to come.

Oh, and something tells me that ORCA is going to have much more than a handful when they come to have a chat with Katie. :)


Maybe the entity is just making Supergirls for the lulz, like DKC's The Alicia Chronicles?

As to ORCA having more than a handful when they come to chat with Katie: Well duh, her breasts are MUCH bigger than that already :P
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08 Jul 2016 15:57 #49028 by lojack
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Oh, thought re: Ella- Either she's getting something extra from Katie when this is over, or she's the paranatural that is feeding off the sexual energy of her converts.

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08 Jul 2016 21:27 - 10 Jul 2016 07:48 #49037 by AuGoose
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jumperprime wrote: Whoa. 150 million? At this point, a fight between the SF Angel and Super Katie will be like an ordinary mortal vs. Supergirl with the SF Angel shattering her own hand punching Super Katie's unprecedented goddess abs.


Funny you should mention that... Though sometimes the lesson 'there's always a bigger fish' doesn't go the way you'd expect...

lojack wrote: Oh, thought re: Ella- Either she's getting something extra from Katie when this is over, or she's the paranatural that is feeding off the sexual energy of her converts.


Chekhov's Gun does demand she have a little more to say before we're done, though she does have an un-credited role in sweeping up the snow from Katie's little foray into meteorology :).

Thanks for the open speculation :cheer:. It makes me feel better knowing that having the answers to these questions in mind almost before the first words were written was brain-sweat that'll pay off in grins later ;).

I did finally do my punch-up pass on part IV - Katie drew up her revised bucket-list :P along with some other new tidbits.

We now return to our National Katie-Day celebration, already in progress.

Fifteen Minutes of Fame (part 5)
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08 Jul 2016 22:56 - 08 Jul 2016 22:58 #49038 by AuGoose
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lojack wrote: That escalated quickly! She does only have five minutes and we have to be running out of time here, especially after the affiliate catch-up and the weather segment.

Yeah. While many things are happening in parallel and a lot of the inter dialogue is the matter of a split second, ultimately I've found and patched in so many little gags since I started that I'll probably retitle it Fifteen Minutes of Fame, It'll take a little juggling and clean-up, but probably for the best. Innitally I was pushing for a tight race, but gawd it's been fun watching her cavort on stage.

I'm curious how she squeezes the last drops out and get to her final form. (I'm guessing the self mod ability goes away at the end of the five minutes, but the rest are hers to keep- a lifetime supply of powers, a copy of the home game, and Rice-a-Roni®, The San Francisco Treat®)

That's much in line with my own sense of the wager. If that doesn't come through I'll need to polish the early dialogue with the Voice a little more.

The big question isn't actually about her, but rather what is the entity getting out of this? It obviously had a reason to make the Angel the way it did, so it was getting something out of that arrangement. (Sexual energy sustains it?) Plus it doubted the million mark, and must be stuffed or even soaking in whatever it is getting at 150x and rising from that. Heck, she was squirming in her seat with excitement/desire when she saw the Angel lift ~2.5 tons of car/guys overhead, and she can do that feat now with a rather large train engine, with more to come.

Oh, and something tells me that ORCA is going to have much more than a handful when they come to have a chat with Katie. :)

Most shall be revealed... :whistle:
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09 Jul 2016 01:44 #49040 by lojack
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Well, now she's gong to need some footwear, and possibly a spare costume......
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10 Jul 2016 08:45 - 10 Jul 2016 16:05 #49047 by AuGoose
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Well, its been a fun ride and I've had my own ups and downs shepherding it along. KIBC is proud to present the penultimate act of our program, part six in a seven part series...

Fifteen Minutes of Fame (part 6)
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10 Jul 2016 13:59 #49049 by slim36
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Finally the fantasies stored in massive server farms around the world can escape. The web of fiber optic cables delivers an apocalyptic blast of terabits to Katie. The final product is the Red Matter from Star Trek that creates black holes and allows for alternate universes and unending sequels.
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10 Jul 2016 23:40 - 11 Jul 2016 00:09 #49056 by LustMonster
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At this point I feel unable to offer any intelligent or constructively witty comment.

Mouth open...

Tongue hanging out...

Drooling...

I probably should just shut up, but at least I gotta say...

This story is so fucking AWESOME!

Please bring on the earth-cracking FINALE...
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11 Jul 2016 15:12 - 11 Jul 2016 16:34 #49071 by AuGoose
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And now for the conclusion of our broadcast, without further commercial interruptions.

Fifteen Minutes of Fame (part 7)
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11 Jul 2016 15:42 #49072 by koopa
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That's some INTENSE and HIGH LEVEL honking mr AU Goose. Really enjoyed this one. Ella's "power-up" sequence has got to be one of the hottest piece of uber-transformation I've ever read. Thank you for sharing and writing this so quickly.

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11 Jul 2016 15:46 #49073 by lojack
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Yay Ella!

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