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Infinity Crisis

08 Nov 2013 14:26 #34148 by lfan
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Anon wrote:

SCOTT R wrote: Thanks for the explanation DKC. It's to bad the lobotomy has to go byebye cuz I think that part rocks. I also appreciate the input on your workflow. I'm writing a story now and it's going really really slow. I have no concrete ending in mind yet so maybe that's the problem.


I have to agree with Scott - although probably for different reasons - while the lobotomy scene was distrubing as heel, it also showed several key points about Natasha. Simply put the lobotomy showed clearly her inexperience, her ignorance and her utter carelessness about other human beings.


FWIW, I agree with Anon and Scott as well. Besides the reasons that Anon said, I "enjoyed" the scene cause it was a fairly creative use of her superpowers that we don't normally see in 95% of the stories around here (I have seen Marknew use a similar use of her heat vision in Jilly Milly, though it wasn't for a lobotomy). Everyone has their characters lift cars, bend bars, etc. but I really appreciate a creative use of superpowers, even ones with evil designs.

My $.02
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23 Dec 2013 04:12 #34803 by pithlit
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Bump.

Okay...it's the end of December. I have been checking every day for about a week for this story to return.

One of my very favourite stories from one of my very favourite writers.

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23 Dec 2013 05:10 - 23 Dec 2013 05:11 #34804 by d_k_c
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Thanks Pithlit and My bad.

I under estimated how long this story is.
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23 Dec 2013 05:51 #34805 by pithlit
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Knowing that it is longer will make it work the wait.

Take your time and make it excellent.

The long stories are the best.

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24 Dec 2013 00:27 #34811 by Caylane
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Should really be more patient. Cant rush great writing!

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24 Dec 2013 01:16 #34812 by pithlit
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@Caylane

I agree. I was just checking in.

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12 Jul 2014 02:55 #37280 by pithlit
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Bump again.

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12 Jul 2014 11:46 #37286 by Woodclaw
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I'm glad that someone picked up this thread, I've been waiting for a chance to read something more from you DKC in quite a while. I hope things are going well.

(formerly Anon, still Librarian)

"What is the point of having free will if one cannot occasionally spit in the eye of destiny?" ("Gentleman" John Marcone)

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12 Sep 2014 04:56 #38096 by pithlit
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Is there an update on this story?

I am very patient.

I just haven't heard any word for 8 months on this.

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19 Aug 2015 06:04 #43709 by pithlit
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Hey d_k_c.

Do you have any update on the re-write?

I am being very patient but this may be my favourite story.

I have a few others I like as much as this but when they reach this level it is impossible to pick a favourite.

Please finish this. Or start it.

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12 Oct 2016 09:02 - 13 Oct 2016 13:06 #50652 by AuGoose
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So I was wandering around the library and came across this story. Which lead me to the related thread.

While I enjoyed the first pass, the re-writes look extra delicious. Hope to read all the new sections integrated into the main arc at some point :). Until then, please accept my applause! ((clap-clap-clap-honk-clap!!))

((and yeah, the whole notion of "hmm, I really should FINISH a tale" weighs on me too some days. But hacking away at it piece by piece has still been my best strategy for moving from 'some' to 'closer to done' :cheer:.))

Also, if anyone has the same kind of trouble navigating the library as I do, here's the link to the folder for this tale~

www.superwomenmania.com/index.php?option...id=229:ic&Itemid=231
Last Edit: 13 Oct 2016 13:06 by AuGoose.
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15 Oct 2016 07:56 #50736 by willow
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There was some mention of D_K_C doing a re-write of the story about a year ago. Would love to know how that is going? Thought it was getting interesting when he stopped, but I got the impression that he seemed to be writing himself into a hole. Hence the re-write.

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