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12 Dec 2016 12:48 - 12 Dec 2016 13:37 #51683 by Monty
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I love the night scene landscaping in the background, it is as impressive as Sarah! I pick up Energize! every so often, but felt it was running out of steam (ouch!) towards the end. Thanks again Njae! :)
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12 Dec 2016 13:52 #51684 by njae
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I've stayed loyal to AMD processors mostly because of their good prices and backwards compatibility. I even switched my broken AM3 Mainboard with an AM3+ back then, so that I could easily upgrade the processor when the time came. Of course DAZ3D is the first thing that actually uses all of these eight cores. In graphics AMD also offers more bang for the buck. Back when I bought my HD7870 I could decide between more performance or PhysX support. I took general performance. Won't happen next time.

I love the night scene landscaping in the background, it is as impressive as Sarah! I pick up Energize! every so often, but felt it was running out of steam (hehe) towards the end. Thanks again Njae!


The background was not part of DaZ3d but rather a background I had used for my futile attempts at mastering photoshop. Thankfully the render and photoshop mix well.
As for the story, I sound like a broken record if I say I'd like to see it continue. But if you think you wrote yourself into a corner, you could try to reboot the story as a new one. You wouldn't be the first author to do that and it would give us new RE-ENERGIZED stories to read.
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12 Dec 2016 21:04 #51687 by Monty
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Back in the day when Energize was rolling out, Lfan suggested an open idea for other writers to write their own versions but I wanted to keep the story "In the family" so to speak. After seeing Njae's great work and seeing still some interest in the story, if any writers want to pick up the 'bottle' and run with it, feel more than free. Goose had a splash around with the gel, and after I got over my "diva ways" (Yeah, yeah Goose, I remember my little tantrum!) ☺ I enjoyed the contribution. Anyway, the (shower) floor is open to anybody.
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12 Dec 2016 21:48 #51689 by njae
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Monty wrote: Back in the day when Energize was rolling out, Lfan suggested an open idea for other writers to write their own versions but I wanted to keep the story "In the family" so to speak. After seeing Njae's great work and seeing still some interest in the story, if any writers want to pick up the 'bottle' and run with it, feel more than free. Goose had a splash around with the gel, and after I got over my "diva ways" (Yeah, yeah Goose, I remember my little tantrum!) ☺ I enjoyed the contribution. Anyway, the (shower) floor is open to anybody.


Now that's a really tempting idea. Part of me really wants to take you up on that offer.
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18 Dec 2021 13:52 - 20 Dec 2021 17:55 #72978 by Monty
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So, I got an email from Emma this weekend. As you would expect, Emma doesn't mess about and can be (ahem) very forceful in her ways.

She said;
"Hey! What are you playing at? What the hell have you done with MY story? Get it sorted or I'm gonna fly over there and kick your ass!"

 

I could only reply;
Ok Emms, I'm on it...
 

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18 Dec 2021 17:13 #72980 by Rjjt456
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So, I got an email from Emma this weekend. As you would expect, Emma doesn't mess about...
She said;
"Hey! What are you playing at? What the hell have you done with MY story? Get it sorted or I'm gonna fly over there and kick your ass!"

 
I could only reply;
Ok Emms, I'm on it...

 
Does this mean that the story has a remaster in its future?

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18 Dec 2021 19:27 - 18 Dec 2021 20:30 #72981 by Monty
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So, I got an email from Emma this weekend. As you would expect, Emma doesn't mess about...
She said;
"Hey! What are you playing at? What the hell have you done with MY story? Get it sorted or I'm gonna fly over there and kick your ass!"

 
I could only reply;
Ok Emms, I'm on it...





 
Does this mean that the story has a remaster in its future?
It is hard to say. There is a new character introduction towards the end here. I'll be looking into a second draft tomorrow with a fresh set of energized eyes....and it will all depend on Emma's tolerance!
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18 Dec 2021 22:22 #72982 by njae
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And here I thought, the main character was Sarah. Emma totally took over.

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19 Dec 2021 00:40 - 20 Dec 2021 16:16 #72983 by Monty
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And here I thought, the main character was Sarah. Emma totally took over.
I found it hard to keep up with and maintain Sarah.
Woodclaw mentioned the very same thing as you have above.
I think Sarah became an introductory character as the story rolled out, but Sarah still has plenty of involvement. She definitely has her moments!
I think I had inadvertently pigeon-holed Sarah as the lab assistant who accidentally gained great powers. Her sister Emma became more of a fun, adolescent and interesting persona and character to run with.
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19 Dec 2021 07:53 #72984 by Rjjt456
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Stories can evolve like that. You start with one idea and then it changes as things develop, and other things catches one’s interest.
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19 Dec 2021 09:36 - 20 Dec 2021 09:50 #72985 by Monty
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After some thought last night, I'll bring Sarah back into the fold. After all, she has been the Super Inspiration.

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"So Monts, did you really think you could leave me out, away from my shower? ​​​Could you?"

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19 Dec 2021 16:14 - 19 Dec 2021 16:20 #72986 by Monty
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That is the latest chapter sent through to the library as per Emma's persistent requests.
(Phew, you really can't say no to all that power from the gal with the gel!)

 

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19 Dec 2021 16:48 #72987 by njae
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Now to wait for a week until it's published, I guess.

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20 Dec 2021 01:10 #72989 by AuGoose
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Grats on lathering up your muse again!
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20 Dec 2021 02:33 - 20 Dec 2021 20:56 #72990 by Monty
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Thanks Goose!
Here is Sarah and with her new-found fame, she has splashed out on a new swimming pool at her apartment. I tried to say, "Now don"t be putting your fizzing gel into the pool, young lady!"
Then I saw her video clip at 30 to 40 seconds...
I could only say, "Oh. ok then, so do what you want to do"



(I wouldn't have been able to stop her anyway.) ​​​​​​

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21 Dec 2021 01:53 #73000 by rednecko
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Seeing Energize get a new chapter is so excited to me. Both Sarah and Emma are fun characters to read.
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21 Dec 2021 02:12 - 21 Dec 2021 08:15 #73001 by Monty
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Seeing Energize get a new chapter is so excited to me. Both Sarah and Emma Sare fun characters to read.
Thanks Red!....and there are maybe just a couple more girls here waiting in the new chapter to join in the fun of feeling Energized!....
 
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21 Dec 2021 09:01 #73002 by Rjjt456
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Yes… Moar!!

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21 Dec 2021 09:29 - 21 Dec 2021 10:24 #73003 by Monty
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Yes… Moar!!
They are Waiting in the Wings, so to speak....
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21 Dec 2021 09:47 #73004 by Rjjt456
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Don’t tease me with “wings”. My imagination will just go into overdrive!

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21 Dec 2021 10:28 - 23 Dec 2021 04:41 #73005 by Monty
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Yes, there will be one girl unknowingly Waiting in the Wings.​
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21 Dec 2021 15:41 - 25 Dec 2021 07:46 #73007 by Monty
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Sarah is fresh out of the shower in her hotel room on the 38th floor in room GG. She has received a call to her room this morning explaining "Sorry miss, but the elevator is out of order. We will have some engineers in today to fix things"

Sarah sighed as she put the phone down in her room.

"Hmmm....perhaps I can fix things with my own special engineering..."

She is disappointed there is none of her gel to use in the hotel. "How could they possibly have my special gel anyway?" she moaned as she cast a furtive glance from her 38th floor window to the street far below..
 "I"m all for a quicker way out of here!"



She reached for her emergency supply of gel in her luggage. The smell of the gel was wonderful as she raised it close to her!
Sarah started gently applying her amazing dream cream, first spreading it over her arms, then through her legs and over her torso. She thought for a moment about applying her wonder gel to her chest.
 "I'm going to need to keep this bra together! There's no point leaving here almost totally naked!" she exclaimed to herself. On the hotel bed, she spread her elixir over her neck and into the very top of her chest. Her Boobs were crying out for a drink of refreshing nourishment and Sarah toyed with the idea of enhancing further, but called down to near below
"No, Girls!, I only have this one bra!"
 Her enrichment work was now complete, as she rose up ​​and turned to face the window on her 38th floor.
 "Time for a quick check out here! This will be a much quicker route back home!"
There would be literally no point bothering with walking down all those stairs to the hotel lobby!
The hotel staff and room cleaners were left scratching their heads at how their beautiful customer (Sarah had left quite an impression upon checking in earlier) had managed to leave the room door locked from the inside, with her window on the 38th floor left wide open....
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21 Dec 2021 23:10 - 24 Dec 2021 07:59 #73009 by Monty
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The new updated chapter has been sent through to Woodclaw.

Hopefully with a couple more surprises in store!
 
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28 Dec 2021 01:21 - 28 Dec 2021 13:07 #73054 by Monty
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Thanks to Woodclaw for updating the latest chapter there. The gel needed a bit of re-work on the opening and closing scenes today to tidy things up...
​​​​​(As much as you can with a continuously growing plethora of body enhancing - for the girls at any rate - molecular mass.)
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06 Jan 2022 23:44 - 07 Jan 2022 01:35 #73076 by Monty
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I've given Sarah one last splash around with her gel before things get out of control...



A re-sub has been sent through to Woodclaw  - and, well, let's just say, things are gonna get way out of control! :)
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