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ENERGIZE! Shower Gel (nsfw)
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I love the night scene landscaping in the background, it is as impressive as Sarah! I pick up Energize! every so often, but felt it was running out of steam (hehe) towards the end. Thanks again Njae!
The background was not part of DaZ3d but rather a background I had used for my futile attempts at mastering photoshop. Thankfully the render and photoshop mix well.
As for the story, I sound like a broken record if I say I'd like to see it continue. But if you think you wrote yourself into a corner, you could try to reboot the story as a new one. You wouldn't be the first author to do that and it would give us new RE-ENERGIZED stories to read.
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Monty wrote: Back in the day when Energize was rolling out, Lfan suggested an open idea for other writers to write their own versions but I wanted to keep the story "In the family" so to speak. After seeing Njae's great work and seeing still some interest in the story, if any writers want to pick up the 'bottle' and run with it, feel more than free. Goose had a splash around with the gel, and after I got over my "diva ways" (Yeah, yeah Goose, I remember my little tantrum!) ☺ I enjoyed the contribution. Anyway, the (shower) floor is open to anybody.
Now that's a really tempting idea. Part of me really wants to take you up on that offer.
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She said;
"Hey! What are you playing at? What the hell have you done with MY story? Get it sorted or I'm gonna fly over there and kick your ass!"
I could only reply;
Ok Emms, I'm on it...
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Does this mean that the story has a remaster in its future?So, I got an email from Emma this weekend. As you would expect, Emma doesn't mess about...
She said;
"Hey! What are you playing at? What the hell have you done with MY story? Get it sorted or I'm gonna fly over there and kick your ass!"
I could only reply;
Ok Emms, I'm on it...
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It is hard to say. There is a new character introduction towards the end here. I'll be looking into a second draft tomorrow with a fresh set of energized eyes....and it will all depend on Emma's tolerance!
Does this mean that the story has a remaster in its future?So, I got an email from Emma this weekend. As you would expect, Emma doesn't mess about...
She said;
"Hey! What are you playing at? What the hell have you done with MY story? Get it sorted or I'm gonna fly over there and kick your ass!"
I could only reply;
Ok Emms, I'm on it...
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I found it hard to keep up with and maintain Sarah.And here I thought, the main character was Sarah. Emma totally took over.
Woodclaw mentioned the very same thing as you have above.
I think Sarah became an introductory character as the story rolled out, but Sarah still has plenty of involvement. She definitely has her moments!
I think I had inadvertently pigeon-holed Sarah as the lab assistant who accidentally gained great powers. Her sister Emma became more of a fun, adolescent and interesting persona and character to run with.
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"So Monts, did you really think you could leave me out, away from my shower? Could you?"
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(Phew, you really can't say no to all that power from the gal with the gel!)
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Here is Sarah and with her new-found fame, she has splashed out on a new swimming pool at her apartment. I tried to say, "Now don"t be putting your fizzing gel into the pool, young lady!"
Then I saw her video clip at 30 to 40 seconds...
I could only say, "Oh. ok then, so do what you want to do"
(I wouldn't have been able to stop her anyway.)
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Thanks Red!....and there are maybe just a couple more girls here waiting in the new chapter to join in the fun of feeling Energized!....Seeing Energize get a new chapter is so excited to me. Both Sarah and Emma Sare fun characters to read.
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They are Waiting in the Wings, so to speak....Yes… Moar!!
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Sarah sighed as she put the phone down in her room.
"Hmmm....perhaps I can fix things with my own special engineering..."
She is disappointed there is none of her gel to use in the hotel. "How could they possibly have my special gel anyway?" she moaned as she cast a furtive glance from her 38th floor window to the street far below..
"I"m all for a quicker way out of here!"
She reached for her emergency supply of gel in her luggage. The smell of the gel was wonderful as she raised it close to her!
Sarah started gently applying her amazing dream cream, first spreading it over her arms, then through her legs and over her torso. She thought for a moment about applying her wonder gel to her chest.
"I'm going to need to keep this bra together! There's no point leaving here almost totally naked!" she exclaimed to herself. On the hotel bed, she spread her elixir over her neck and into the very top of her chest. Her Boobs were crying out for a drink of refreshing nourishment and Sarah toyed with the idea of enhancing further, but called down to near below
"No, Girls!, I only have this one bra!"
Her enrichment work was now complete, as she rose up and turned to face the window on her 38th floor.
"Time for a quick check out here! This will be a much quicker route back home!"
There would be literally no point bothering with walking down all those stairs to the hotel lobby!
The hotel staff and room cleaners were left scratching their heads at how their beautiful customer (Sarah had left quite an impression upon checking in earlier) had managed to leave the room door locked from the inside, with her window on the 38th floor left wide open....
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Hopefully with a couple more surprises in store!
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(As much as you can with a continuously growing plethora of body enhancing - for the girls at any rate - molecular mass.)
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A re-sub has been sent through to Woodclaw - and, well, let's just say, things are gonna get way out of control!
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