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Fall of Superior Girl

17 May 2017 21:27 #54148 by willow
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Whooray! Back from a much needed vacation. The problems from earlier are gone so I have uploaded Chapter 13. Will see about also getting Chapter 14 out this week too in order to make up for lost time.
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17 May 2017 21:46 #54149 by Woodclaw
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willow wrote: Whooray! Back from a much needed vacation. The problems from earlier are gone so I have uploaded Chapter 13. Will see about also getting Chapter 14 out this week too in order to make up for lost time.


And it's on :)

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18 May 2017 05:11 #54155 by willow
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Chapter 14 is also posted. Just a reminder that this is a 20 chapter story. I also have an epilogue and two alternate ending chapters that I plan on including to the overall story. Next chapter will be posted next week.
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19 May 2017 15:42 #54177 by smoki07
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An author who plans his story from the start to the end! It's rare and he need to be appreciated! congrats! Great chapter!

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28 May 2017 05:00 #54322 by willow
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Just posted Chapter 15. Hope everyone enjoys it.
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28 May 2017 21:35 #54334 by jumperprime
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Heh, when she describes her flying posture as "flat as a board" it made me laugh. Flat as a board? Not with THOSE tits.

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28 May 2017 22:39 #54335 by Woodclaw
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jumperprime wrote: Heh, when she describes her flying posture as "flat as a board" it made me laugh. Flat as a board? Not with THOSE tits.


Not so loud she might hear you :P

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05 Jun 2017 06:44 #54544 by willow
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Chapter 16 is now online. Hope you all enjoy.
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06 Jun 2017 01:44 #54558 by anaheim
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thank chapter 16 great story!

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06 Jun 2017 04:22 #54560 by zebraml
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Great chapter indeed! With only four to go, though, I must ask: will there be a battle (or more than one) involving Superior Girl and Superman and Power Girl? I for one would love to see Superior Girl owning Superman once again, just to have her (barely) stopped by Power Girl down the road. Close guess? :)

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12 Jun 2017 06:38 #54684 by willow
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Thanks for all the great comments! Chapter 17 has been posted.

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12 Jun 2017 08:33 #54689 by Woodclaw
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willow wrote: Thanks for all the great comments! Chapter 17 has been posted.


The story is now published. For the record we are now under official workshop embargo so no new story will be published for the following two weeks to give people time to read and make up their mind about the new workshop entries.

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12 Jun 2017 23:01 #54708 by jumperprime
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Huh? since when does Superior Girl have brown hair? I thought Jessie was always a blonde?

Also, Ollie's gonna be pissed that Superior Girl scuffed his building.

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13 Jun 2017 08:03 #54721 by Woodclaw
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jumperprime wrote: Huh? since when does Superior Girl have brown hair? I thought Jessie was always a blonde?

Also, Ollie's gonna be pissed that Superior Girl scuffed his building.


As Willow already told before when I pointed out that Michelle was supposed to be african-american, she's taking some liberties with the characters' appearence.

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14 Jun 2017 05:14 #54755 by willow
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LOL. That may have been a typo on my part. I actually have several pages of notes on main characters detailing appearance, motivation, etc. I should probably reference it more than trying to rely on memory all the time.

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28 Jun 2017 01:05 #55044 by willow
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Just wanted to give everyone a quick update. I am probably going to wait another week or two before publishing the next chapter to Fall of Superior Girl. As you can guess, it is the fight between Superior Girl and Power Girl so I want to make sure it is sufficiently epic for what has been 17 chapters of build-up.
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28 Jun 2017 01:31 #55045 by LustMonster
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willow wrote: Just wanted to give everyone a quick update. I am probably going to wait another week or two before publishing the next chapter to Fall of Superior Girl. As you can guess, it is the fight between Superior Girl and Power Girl so I want to make sure it is sufficiently epic for what has been 17 chapters of build-up.


Epic is good! :)

Take your time...

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28 Jun 2017 08:20 #55049 by Woodclaw
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willow wrote: Just wanted to give everyone a quick update. I am probably going to wait another week or two before publishing the next chapter to Fall of Superior Girl. As you can guess, it is the fight between Superior Girl and Power Girl so I want to make sure it is sufficiently epic for what has been 17 chapters of build-up.


No problem Willow, we are still under workshop embargo ;) :P

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28 Jun 2017 14:02 #55055 by anaheim
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Sad news, but I look forward to the next part.

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09 Jul 2017 01:01 #55190 by willow
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Alright, the big showdown in Chapter 18 has been posted and ready for publication as soon as the embargo is lifted.
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