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09 Jul 2017 03:23 #55191 by anaheim
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great news

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09 Jul 2017 07:32 #55192 by Woodclaw
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willow wrote: Alright, the big showdown in Chapter 18 has been posted and ready for publication as soon as the embargo is lifted.


The embargo is already off, so the chapter is now online for all to enjoy.

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10 Jul 2017 12:25 #55202 by anaheim
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Is Monica Braun the last Ambrosia Amazon left?

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11 Jul 2017 06:58 #55208 by willow
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The last one free at least, although she probably isn't doing so well considering she is minus an arm.

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11 Jul 2017 09:30 #55210 by Woodclaw
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willow wrote: The last one free at least, although she probably isn't doing so well considering she is minus an arm.


This might lead to some interesting speculations about the regenerative abilities of the Ambrosia Amazons.

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11 Jul 2017 17:14 #55217 by smoki07
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It's quiet funny or ironic that it was mention of her (ex)boyfriend which throw her into rage made considering how many time she cheated on him lol

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12 Jul 2017 09:05 #55221 by Woodclaw
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smoki07 wrote: It's quiet funny or ironic that it was mention of her (ex)boyfriend which throw her into rage made considering how many time she cheated on him lol


I think this might be a bad case of guilty conscience.

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12 Jul 2017 12:22 #55223 by smoki07
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smoki07 wrote: It's quiet funny or ironic that it was mention of her (ex)boyfriend which throw her into rage made considering how many time she cheated on him lol


I think this might be a bad case of guilty conscience.


probably.I wonder if she gonna meet Mike in next chapter(s) and how will they react.

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18 Jul 2017 03:32 #55303 by willow
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Just a quick heads up. Next chapter is likely going to be delayed another week. Windows is giving me trouble so a complete wipe and reinstall are in order (actually overdue). Don't worry, multiple backups of the story are safe online already so nothing will be lost.
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23 Jul 2017 22:09 #55433 by Thoth
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Chapter 19 coming this weekend?

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03 Aug 2017 02:13 #55653 by Thoth
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Do we have any idea when Chapter 19 is coming?

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03 Aug 2017 13:04 #55673 by Woodclaw
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Thoth wrote: Do we have any idea when Chapter 19 is coming?


I guess that Willow is working on it, but the summer heat can slow a writer down ... a lot.

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04 Aug 2017 23:01 #55695 by willow
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What? Oh, yeah....ah....yeah. That's right. (insert random George R.R. Martin meme) In all seriousness, life just got a bit in the way as it does on occasion. Should have the next chapter out this weekend.
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12 Aug 2017 10:04 #55792 by TheOne25
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Really enjoying this story Willow! I'm really excited to see what happens in the next chapter

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22 Aug 2017 05:13 #55925 by willow
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Ok, Finally posted Chapter 19. Can't George R.R. Martin this any further. Just a few final touches on Chapter 20 and that is the end of this story.
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22 Aug 2017 09:25 #55927 by Woodclaw
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willow wrote: Ok, Finally posted Chapter 19. Can't George R.R. Martin this any further. Just a few final touches on Chapter 20 and that is the end of this story.


Just in time, Fats finished to sort out the back end yesterday and now things are working once again.

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26 Aug 2017 16:50 #55970 by Franky
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I enjoyed all chapters of your Superior Girl story so far. Thanks for your hard work.


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26 Aug 2017 17:23 #55971 by AuGoose
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Finally getting a chance to get back into this. The latest chapter was all kinds of hot. Lana's transformation and 'going super' party would have brought the house down almost anywhere else :). Really looking forward to settling in for a more detailed reading.

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26 Aug 2017 23:09 #55974 by Pepper
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I've been following the story as well; figured I'd save my comments until the end since we're so close.

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29 Aug 2017 03:29 #56006 by willow
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And done. The final chapter, Chapter 20, has been posted for your reading enjoyment. It was really fun writing this story. I am going to take a bit of a break from writing for a bit to recover. However, as I mentioned earlier, I have two Alternate Endings that I want to write once my vacation is over.
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