Interactive story

Hello,

I've just added 5 parts in an interactive story on writing.com
I anyone is intersting to give me feed back or, let's dream, add some parts!

Here is the link :

www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/19...nicles-MF/map/152121

Thanks!

(PS : I was SophiePortman which can explain my bad english...)

Welcome back Sophie! Haven't clicked it yet but I can assume it involves some amazing sibling rivalry Glad to have you back!

Added: Just read them, a great start so far! Cant wait for more.

Awesome start!

Added a chapter!

www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/19...s-MF/map/15212112111

Amazing additions. I hope you'll continue.
I love the unfairness of the situation and that your main character truly revels in her empowerment!

I always did want to write a choose your own adventure

@jnw550 Thanks for your added chapter ! I'll try to carry on this one soon !

And of course, I really want to emphasize how unpleasant it must be to see your best friend or your little sister becoming impossibly better and sexier than anything else ! Lena has clearly all the luck and she love to make her relatives feel it...

@oogber, don't hesitate to participate

As always a great story Sophie.
Is there any chance of you posting those from your old blogs again or are they gone forever?

I would have liked but I supressed these accounts some years ago... I did not save anything !

Anyway, I've participated to another interactive story based on beautyfication some times ago. The creator of the story told me he did not care if I introduced some superhuman powers stuff into my parts...

Of course, some of the parts are not mine (since it's participative...) :
www.writing.com/main/interact/cid/2139647

As usual, if you feel so, do not hesitate to contribute