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ABX by MarkNew now in the bank!

23 Aug 2007 11:39 #10113 by admin
ABX by MarkNew now in the bank! was created by admin
Many thanks to MarkNew for letting us host his latest story, "ABX" in our StoryBank.

www.superwomenmania.com/storybank

or just click on the StoryBank link at the very top of the page.


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19 Sep 2007 13:17 #10329 by kshoo
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I liked the premise, the concept and the overall story that Clark lost his powers, but felt that it was a tad too lengthy...maybe trying to trim it slightly?

Just my 2 cents worth...

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20 Sep 2007 02:18 #10335 by willow
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I liked it a lot though, and am glad it did not get too drawn out. I would have preferred more scenes in which both girls played more with their super strength and other powers beyond just augmenting their friends in the end. Or maybe more about what the girls did around the world after reconciling with each other.

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I liked the premise, the concept and the overall story that Clark lost his powers, but felt that it was a tad too lengthy...maybe trying to trim it slightly?

Just my 2 cents worth...

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