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Chapter 10 of The Supergirl of Smallville NOW IN THE BANK!!!
21 Dec 2007 16:51 #11171
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21 Dec 2007 20:35 #11175
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Fantastic Image! Thanks!
Plus I like where the story goes. Getting into the complexities of the law and a hero bringing a person to justice while taking advantage of their powers but not hurting anyone or breaking their rights is interesting and good fun. Writing that kind of dialogue must have been difficult too ~ but it came off well. Nice style.
What would you do if you found out the guy (not girl) next door could see through walls and would have a desire to bust you for those batteries you illegally just tossed in the normal trash?!
Plus I like where the story goes. Getting into the complexities of the law and a hero bringing a person to justice while taking advantage of their powers but not hurting anyone or breaking their rights is interesting and good fun. Writing that kind of dialogue must have been difficult too ~ but it came off well. Nice style.
What would you do if you found out the guy (not girl) next door could see through walls and would have a desire to bust you for those batteries you illegally just tossed in the normal trash?!
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21 Dec 2007 20:58 #11176
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Nice pic.
One question: Would the story continue like the first 9 chapters?
That was really great.
Btw : The story is great!!
One question: Would the story continue like the first 9 chapters?
That was really great.
Btw : The story is great!!
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22 Dec 2007 03:29 #11183
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Thank you, gentlemen!
Brantwood: Yes -- Chapter 10 begins right where Chapter 9 ended, with Lana dragging Fat Tony out of his office and into the bar.
Brantwood: Yes -- Chapter 10 begins right where Chapter 9 ended, with Lana dragging Fat Tony out of his office and into the bar.
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22 Dec 2007 19:10 #11188
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I meant the form of the first 9 chapters, with those great pics in the story. :wink: :wink:
I meant the form of the first 9 chapters, with those great pics in the story. :wink: :wink:
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22 Dec 2007 21:27 #11194
by argonaut
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Oh. Well, we don't have an illustration for Chapter 10, but we did commission that "Super Santa" picture for our fellow SWManiacs.
Ace has already commissioned an illustration for the next chapter, even though we've barely begun writing it. And we have several pictures ready for future chapters -- including one that happens to be my personal favorite!
So the answer to your question is "yes."
Ace has already commissioned an illustration for the next chapter, even though we've barely begun writing it. And we have several pictures ready for future chapters -- including one that happens to be my personal favorite!
So the answer to your question is "yes."
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22 Dec 2007 22:54 #11195
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Thanks Argonaut for the answer.
I can't hardly wait!! :wink: :wink:
I can't hardly wait!! :wink: :wink:
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22 Dec 2007 22:56 #11196
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Not to worry, Brantwood. We are currently plotted out for 21 chapters.
I have three scans on my hard drive and TGK is working on a fourth which I guarantee you will be ready long before Argo and I even start working again on our now very rough Chapter 11. You can pretty well figure it will average about one scan a chapter.
We have one chapter that we have written and re-written multiple times which has over 5000 words in it. That one may end up with two scans.
Don't hold your breath though. Since there is no deadline and we both have day jobs, we will work on it when we are in the mood and have the time but eventually, if nothing bad happens to Argo, TGK or myself, we will get it done!
I have three scans on my hard drive and TGK is working on a fourth which I guarantee you will be ready long before Argo and I even start working again on our now very rough Chapter 11. You can pretty well figure it will average about one scan a chapter.
We have one chapter that we have written and re-written multiple times which has over 5000 words in it. That one may end up with two scans.
Don't hold your breath though. Since there is no deadline and we both have day jobs, we will work on it when we are in the mood and have the time but eventually, if nothing bad happens to Argo, TGK or myself, we will get it done!
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22 Dec 2007 23:51 #11197
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Okay okay!! You got me! :oops: :oops:
The story is absolutly great!!
Keep up the good work!!
Merry Christmas and a happy new year 2008!
The story is absolutly great!!
Keep up the good work!!
Merry Christmas and a happy new year 2008!
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27 Mar 2008 15:48 #11997
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Whats good im digging the story its pretty dam sweet. I WAS JUST WONDERING WHEN YOU MIGHT UPDATE THE NEXT couple of chapteres
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27 Mar 2008 19:22 #12001
by argonaut
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Thanks, Rich!
Ace and I are getting the next few chapters ready right now. Chapters 11, 13, and 14 just about finished, but we need to write Chapter 12 from scratch. If all goes well, you can expect the next update in a few weeks.
And yes, it will be illustrated.
In the meantime, we have new stories from AK, DKC, and Berkhart! Thank, guys!
Ace and I are getting the next few chapters ready right now. Chapters 11, 13, and 14 just about finished, but we need to write Chapter 12 from scratch. If all goes well, you can expect the next update in a few weeks.
And yes, it will be illustrated.
In the meantime, we have new stories from AK, DKC, and Berkhart! Thank, guys!
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30 May 2008 17:33 #12469
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Sorry to sound like im being a pain but i was wondering if you had any update on the story?
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30 May 2008 18:26 #12470
by argonaut
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Hi, Rich:
Thanks for asking. It's good to know there are readers who want more of the story.
Read my post of May 28 on the "Favorite Superwoman Fantasy" forum for a "progress report."
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Thanks for asking. It's good to know there are readers who want more of the story.
Read my post of May 28 on the "Favorite Superwoman Fantasy" forum for a "progress report."
Argonaut
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18 Jun 2008 15:01 #12617
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I've got something for the StoryBank, and there's more on the way.
But admin isn't picking up his messages.
Can any of the other moderators help?
But admin isn't picking up his messages.
Can any of the other moderators help?
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19 Jun 2008 09:54 #12622
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Emergency! Call 911! This story needs to be posted post-haste!
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19 Jun 2008 14:24 #12624
by lfan
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In lieu of admin posting it, might I suggest Argo email it to those who cannot wait?
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Emergency! Call 911! This story needs to be posted post-haste!
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19 Jun 2008 17:25 #12627
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good idea lfan, i'm interested
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19 Jun 2008 17:33 #12628
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second that
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19 Jun 2008 18:25 #12631
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Well, I'm interested too.
Argo, do you still have my e-mail?
Argo, do you still have my e-mail?
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19 Jun 2008 19:27 #12633
by argonaut
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Maybe I should have been a little more specific.
What I've been wanting to send to the StoryBank are my translations of the three character profiles from Artnico's site (superheroines-univers). I mentioned these before, on another thread, and didn't get much of a response. But if anyone would like to read them, let me know and I'll email them to you.
I've almost completed a translation of a story about the "Sara Line" character. Once I've finished, I'll email it to anyone who's interested.
As for "The Supergirl of Smallville" -- A camping trip and a conference have kept me away from that project for the past week or so, but Ace and I are putting the final touches on a four-chapter update that should be ready soon. Ace has even splurged on an additional illustration. But I'm really hoping this can go in the StoryBank so that it can be properly formatted. admin, where are you?
What I've been wanting to send to the StoryBank are my translations of the three character profiles from Artnico's site (superheroines-univers). I mentioned these before, on another thread, and didn't get much of a response. But if anyone would like to read them, let me know and I'll email them to you.
I've almost completed a translation of a story about the "Sara Line" character. Once I've finished, I'll email it to anyone who's interested.
As for "The Supergirl of Smallville" -- A camping trip and a conference have kept me away from that project for the past week or so, but Ace and I are putting the final touches on a four-chapter update that should be ready soon. Ace has even splurged on an additional illustration. But I'm really hoping this can go in the StoryBank so that it can be properly formatted. admin, where are you?
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20 Jun 2008 09:16 #12641
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In this case I amn't interrested anymore, since I can read french quite well.
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20 Jun 2008 22:33 #12649
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I got the pencils back last night and ok'd it for ink and color. I am still betting that once again, TGK will have the art work ready before our editor has the final revisions completed!
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21 Jun 2008 03:24 #12652
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You mean "co-author/editor," don't you, Ace? :wink:
Check your mailbox. I just sent you the second part of that chapter we've been working on ...
Check your mailbox. I just sent you the second part of that chapter we've been working on ...
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21 Jun 2008 21:16 #12658
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22 Jun 2008 13:17 #12664
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Nice pictures!!
Great work!
Great work!
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