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SuperGirl of Smallville - Chapter 21 Now Posted -- 3/26/10
Thanks to the authors for their contributions (and patience) with this posting!
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Only thing I didn't like was that Jake Ryder guy, he really rubs me the worng way. Bad boy, good looking, loved by everyone,... its like every character trait I can't stand concentrated into an entity of singular annoyance. Please tell me he turns out to be evil and Supergirl has to... deal with him. Violently. :twisted:
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Fantastic stuff guys. Good pace, nice character work, a couple of good action bits, and the artwork was, as ever, great.
Only thing I didn't like was that Jake Ryder guy, he really rubs me the worng way. Bad boy, good looking, loved by everyone,... its like every character trait I can't stand concentrated into an entity of singular annoyance. Please tell me he turns out to be evil and Supergirl has to... deal with him. Violently. :twisted:
If my MA in comic book geekology is still up there is an original DC comics character called Jack Ryder, who later became the wacko superhero the Creeper.
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Jake Ryder was one of Ace's contributions. At first I wasn't keen on introducing a new character so late in the story, but he turned out to be a fun character to write. We wanted him to be cocky and obnoxious, and judging by CNJ's reaction, it looks like we succeeded. He'll be facing Supergirl in the next chapter -- but that's all I'm going to say. I'd forgotten about Jack Ryder (a.k.a. the Creeper) until Anon's post reminded me, so no -- there's no relation between the two characters.
Ace and I have drafted about 80% of the next chapter, so we hope to be posting it before too long. Feedback like yours is a real motivator to keep writing!
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great work as usual!!!
One Question: Can DKC do some Pics with Heat vision in the future of
upcoming episodes of TSOS or Infinity Girl? :?: :?: :?: :?:
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One Question: Can DKC do some Pics with Heat vision in the future of
upcoming episodes of TSOS or Infinity Girl?
TGK can do anything we can think up. There is a nice x-ray vision picture in Chapter Nine. We will definitely try to keep this request in mind. The next two chapters have already been 80-90% written, and they have two pictures each. Two are finished, and TGK is working on the last two now.
So bottom line, it may take us a while to get to it, but I am sure that we will.
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Hey Argonaut,
great work as usual!!!
One Question: Can DKC do some Pics with Heat vision in the future of
upcoming episodes of TSOS or Infinity Girl? :?: :?: :?: :?:
Ace just answered your question, but I wanted to point out that he gets half the credit for the story!
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Keep it on!!
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And with regards toJack Ryder, you certainly made him obnoxious. I don't think I liked him any more than CNJ.
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Thanks for the story. It continues to satisfy.
Thanks, Yosh! Team Acenaut aims to satisfy!
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I finally got a chance to read Chapter 21. It's quite possibly the best yet. Carry on .
Wow ... Thanks! :oops:
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Perhaps he didn't see your question...ever think of that, Brainiac!
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There's no need for rudeness I asked q question and got ignored unacceptable in my books. I appreciate your busy but your story is not the be all and end all if my life. A simple "were writing the story and it will be up as soon as will do". So let's write the next chapter for you. Lana was walking along when she saw a aeroplane crashing to the ground. She turned to her left and her right and knew this was a job for. The worlds mightest girl. In an instant she had gone from mousy lana Lang to powerful supergirl. Her super brain knew she had a few seconds before the plain crashed so she broke the sped barrier to get there as soon as possible. She arrived at the plane in a few seconds And without any strength at all swooped infer the 10 ton plane. She started to gravitate it towarda Paris with her mighty muscles. She then landed the plane as the passengers chanted supergirl supergirl"
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I just got back from Saturday night dinner and I caught this post.
Argo has been very busy with other things (work, vacation and baseball)
and I have not heard from him in 8 days. He very rarely checks the boards here, so I will have to apologize for missing your post, but to be fair, I was out of the country at the time you posted it.
We have a great TGK illustration for it in the can so to speak, so as soon as the final revisions are finished, we will send it to Admin.
We finished chapter 23 THREE YEARS AGO, so it should not take long to
revise one last time. We have two great TGK illustrations in the can for that as well.
I will most likely spend a good part of July 5th at my desk, and that should just about completely bail me out of the deep hole I have been in for the last couple of weeks.
Hopefully by then, Argo will be finished with whatever he has been up to and we will "Get Er Done!"
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As for the authors, I agree with one part of his post: Supergirl of Smallville is as charming, well-plotted, and well-written as any serial could be. Please accept my gratitude on behalf of your ah, more reasonable readers. It's a terrific story you're weaving, and delightfully presented. Thank you so very much for your hard and unpaid work. I wish praise were reward enough.
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We finished chapter 23 THREE YEARS AGO, so it should not take long to
revise one last time. We have two great TGK illustrations in the can for that as well.
So that means chapter 22 and 23 are going to come soon?
Going ahead is the only one way to go to the future.
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