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Supergirl of Smallville Ch 22 -- Now posted 7/14/10

14 Jul 2010 17:26 #19775 by lfan
OK, back by popular demand/incesant bitching, we're proud to announce the latest installment of Supergirl of Smallville by Ace and Argo (Team Acenaut) is now posted in the Storybank along with some fabutastic illustrations embedded in the story by TGK.

Check it out and please let the authors know how much you enjoyed it as much as some of you reminded me it needed to be posted :P

Apologies for the delays in posting, but real life is a little tumultuous these days. However, while I might be late, I'm doing my best over here....

N-joy the story and thanks to Team AceNaut once again!

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14 Jul 2010 18:56 #19779 by oldHarmonyMotion
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Awesome work guys! Was this a throwback to the old Supergirl issue?

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15 Jul 2010 00:15 #19783 by steelknight3000
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Haha, I don't know why this particular story makes people excited. I liked the illustrations, but it just looks like an extremely long piece of fanfiction.

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15 Jul 2010 03:07 #19786 by sgfan05
Yes, that was an excellent chapter. Good work gentlemen!

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15 Jul 2010 06:28 #19790 by yohashuan

but it just looks like an extremely long piece of fanfiction.


...something that a community built by a bunch of people who get hard-ons for Supergirl is surprisingly lacking in quantity.

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15 Jul 2010 15:42 #19792 by argonaut
sgfan05: Thanks for the props!

goobers: You, too. Ace and I weren't referencing any particular story. Which one were you thinking of?

steelknight3000: Ace and I prefer to think of it as an "homage" ...

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15 Jul 2010 20:13 #19794 by oldHarmonyMotion
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It's from one of the first issues of Supergirl where the cover is of her sitting outside of a school dance, mourning that she can't get a date :)

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15 Jul 2010 22:29 #19800 by argonaut

It's from one of the first issues of Supergirl where the cover is of her sitting outside of a school dance, mourning that she can't get a date :)


Oh, yeah, this one:

www.comics.org/issue/25911/cover/4/?style=default

I didn't have it in mind while Ace and I were writing Chapter 22 -- but we had TGK draw an homage to that cover for Chapter 14.

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24 Jul 2010 12:06 #19868 by JKIJ
Another good chapter. Hard not to feel sorry for Lana and Lex; nothing seems to be going as they've planned.

Thank you for the time and effort put in.

One question, was the bit when Supergirl overheard the radio the incident that Argo mentioned a while ago in relation to the laws of physics or is it yet to come or already gone? I'm curious to see how that was resolved.

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24 Jul 2010 15:12 #19872 by argonaut
Glad you liked it.

Regarding Lex and Lana: Stay tuned.

In answer to your question:

Remember when Supergirl used her super-breath to keep the farmer's pick-up from going off the road, just before she flew off to rescue Suzy and Jake? In the original draft, I had Supergirl swoop down ... push the truck away from the guardrail ... ask the farmer if he was all right ... then fly off.

That's when Ace went "Sheldon Cooper" on me and pointed out that Jake and Suzy would have been a mile away by then, and that by the time the sound of the crash reached Supergirl's ears it would have been too late for her to catch them.

Three years into our partnership, Ace and I still have a friendly and mutually respectful working relationship, but every now and then we do butt heads -- sometimes over the most trivial things.

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24 Jul 2010 18:30 #19877 by ace191
I was fine with Supergirl stopping to help the farmer, but I wanted her to take off and start watching Jake and Suzy and as she was closing in on them, she would see the crash and then put on a burst of speed to save them.


From a story teller's point of view, Argo wanted SG to be doing something else and then be surprised by hearing it happen and then have to rush off.

As we always do, we comprised and he got to do it his way, but we had the crash happen only 1/5 of a mile or so away ( one second for the sound to reach her) so the laws of physics were not broken!

Since no one noticed or objected ( we did not get any letters to Super Fe-Mail on this), I guess it worked out alright!

And you wonder why it takes us so long to finish a chapter sometimes!

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27 Jul 2010 18:02 #19899 by JKIJ
I probably wouldn't have noticed that the speed of sound was a problem with the original scenario, but I'm glad the laws of physics weren't broken in the end. Thanks for the glimpse behind the scenes.

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27 Jul 2010 21:56 #19901 by argonaut
That's right -- no laws of physics were broken as Supergirl flew off to save Tami and Jake. :wink:

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27 Jul 2010 23:57 #19905 by d_k_c
"That's right -- no laws of physics were broken as Supergirl flew"

The irony of this statement puts a smile on my face. =)

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28 Jul 2010 03:45 #19909 by ace191
You guys seem to be implying that a law was broken. Which one?

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28 Jul 2010 19:44 #19912 by d_k_c
Well, Doesn't Supergirl flying break the rules of physics? And if thats the case then theres not a story in the genre that doesnt break the rules of physics. I guess what I'm saying is....I wouldn't worry so much about physics.

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29 Jul 2010 00:51 #19916 by Risatara
I think he was talking about breaking the laws of physic without telling us.

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29 Jul 2010 04:57 #19920 by ace191
To the best of my knowledge, Lana did not break any of the laws of physics when she flew off to the rescue.

The speed of light is roughly 186,000 miles per second. Lana needed to cover roughly one fifth of a mile so her average speed would be about one millionth of the speed of light.

You don’t really have to worry about relativistic mass effect until you get to velocities about 0.1C, and her speed was far, far from that so standard Newtonian Mechanics would apply.

F=MA where F is the force, M the mass and A the acceleration.

Put another way, A =F/M

A 30.06 rifle bullet leaves the muzzle around 3000 feet per second. Even if it slowed down to an average speed of 2000 feet per second it would cover the 1/5 mile in ½ a second.

We all know that Kryptonians are faster than a speeding bullet, so there is certainly no violation of the laws of physics for Lana to accelerate for the first 1/10 of a mile and then decelerate for the next 1/10 and arrive in time to save the day.

It is true that we still have much to learn about Kryptonian PHYSIOLOGY
which is why we all work so hard here each day at the Southwest Desert Kryptonian Physiological Research Institute. Won’t you please help us to continue this important work by making a generous contribution to:

larafan22@yahoo.com

Thank you in advance for your kind support of this important work!

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29 Jul 2010 17:32 #19921 by eavatar
You puppies' serial killer!

Don't you never read about everytime you use real physics to explain a super being a puppy is killed by a scientologist?

I love Lana, and being sincere, I don't need real physics explanation for her powers and deeds. All what I want is read a good story about a red haired super girl and wonder how the world will act once she graduate to super woman... I imagine she would be the inspiration for a whole generation of heroines, maybe even be the muse for Legion of Super Heroines at 30th century

Going ahead is the only one way to go to the future.

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31 Jul 2010 02:43 #19944 by steelknight3000
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You don't need to worry about physics in a story like this, especially when it involves comic book superheroes that can magically fly and shoot lasers with their eyes. In fact I enjoy it when a super female is so strong and fast she seems to defy physics, as long as it doesn't get too absurd.

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06 Aug 2010 01:05 #20001 by yaracyrrah
I'm back from vacation and catching up on online stuff, so a belated cheer for Chapter 22 and its dedicated production staff. Thanks guys!

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