Halloween Story by Martin Kane -- posted 11/1/10

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01 Nov 2010 13:18 #20772 by lfan

Halloween Story by Martin Kane -- posted 11/1/10 was created by lfan

OK, posted a tad late, but in celebrating the Halloween Holiday, Martin Kane has cooked up a special treat! Check out "Supergirl & the Halloween Party", now featured in the Story Bank.

Thx for the contribution, Martin.

Oh, yes....I almost forgot, stay tuned for the latest fantastic chapter of SGOS from AceNaut later this week!!

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01 Nov 2010 19:00 #20774 by shadar

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Very entertaining story and well written. Thanks for some nice Halloween fantasies. I always like stories which reveal a hidden reality, showing us there is more to the world than we even fantasize.

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02 Nov 2010 02:26 #20778 by yaracyrrah

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Great story! Thanks Martin!

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02 Nov 2010 07:51 #20779 by d_k_c

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Yeah, that was great! Keep it coming =)

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02 Nov 2010 10:18 #20780 by argonaut

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Even aside from the supergirl content, a terrific story. Thank you!

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04 Nov 2010 02:35 #20800 by Random321

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Thanks for taking the time to write this - a fantastic story well executed. I should have seen it coming and I did not – made it all the better. Great Halloween treat! Thanks very much.

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04 Nov 2010 09:45 #20808 by Woodclaw

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While I'm not a fan of Halloween stories, I think that this is a great piece of work. Thumbs up.

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04 Nov 2010 20:15 #20812 by Sarge395

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Finished it. Great story. Loved the ending since it seems to leave it open for follow on adventures.

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05 Nov 2010 06:59 #20816 by oldHarmonyMotion

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Very interesting concept! Nice writing too.

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05 Nov 2010 18:51 #20823 by ace191

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Caution spoilers:

“Wow,” Tyler remarked at seeing Susan’s costume, “I love it. Supergirl had a huge impression on my boyhood.”
She smiled and gave him a cute curtsy. The skirt was a little shorter than she was used to, the top a tad tighter than she’d normally be comfortable with........

Yes, yes it was!

I think this was my favorite line. It was right there and I went right by it, as I expect most everyone else did as well.

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06 Nov 2010 11:03 #20826 by mkseq

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Thanks guys, I'm glad this tale went down well because I had real fun writing it. (Though it was a kinda last minute thing, hense it's slightly late delivery, entirely my fault not the site moderator's.)

And my first real attempt at a Supergirl story. The whole Halloween costume thing got inside my head and wouldn't let go!

A belated Happy Halloween to you all!

Thanks for all the kind comments,

Martin Kane.

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07 Nov 2010 03:57 #20829 by sgfan05

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That was awesome dude, SG, plus multiple super-gals, and nice twist.

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05 Dec 2010 11:24 #21023 by JKIJ

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Very enjoyable. A nice twist at the end that I didn't see coming, though when I read the story a second time I noted that the hints were there throughout. Thanks for this.

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