The Experiment Part 3 -- Posted 1/14/11

:shock: Well, after a long, long, long, long, long, long, LONG delay, Part 3 of 'The Experiment' is now up in the Storybank.

In this chapter, Scorpion tangles with more mercenaries, some incredibly dense security guards, and automotive trouble! Check it out, and don't don't forget to leave feedback.

I really liked the storys, well described scenes, interesting plot development. Looking forward to the next part.

Thanks Gargamel! Hopefully, part 4 won't take as long as 3 did... :oops:

I really like the woman wakes up in room, has no memory part. I also like the direction you went, with her no longer being the person she was before, and how everyone else can't understand it.

I found the dialogue in part 2 to be pretty unbelievable. Kate sees her dead friend, buys her clothes, and actually gets annoyed at her when she asks for food? The formatting and lack of paragraphs made the dialogue somewhat hard to read too.

All of those problems went away in part 3, I liked it a lot! Dialogue was much better, and easier to read.

Can't wait for 4!

I liked Scorpion's reason for needing to be driven. It probably wouldn't have occured to me that Alexis either didn't remember or had never known where the corporation was based.

I wonder what TPE 's goal is and how far Scorpion is willing to go to help them bfore taking them down. It will be interesting to find out.