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Danger in the Wilderness

07 Aug 2011 19:49 #24269 by argonaut
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Dr. Muttonchops has just posted an excellent new Superwoman story.

My only complaint about his previous story was that Superwoman didn't go into action until about 2/3 of the way through. Here, we get lots of action, spread across the entire story, along with the humor and period flavor that we've come to expect. (The screaming headlines and fast-talking radio announcers are nice homages to the Fleischer cartoons.) Plus the introduction of a classic villain.

Recommended for your weekend reading enjoyment.
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08 Aug 2011 01:26 #24276 by inactive
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That was a fun story. Superwoman Vs. A Bear!

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08 Aug 2011 02:18 #24278 by argonaut
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Yeah, that was pretty awesome, but the scene in the tavern was my favorite.

If Lfan wants to revive the 1000-word story workshop, a good subject might be "A superwoman walks into a bar ..."
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08 Aug 2011 02:29 #24279 by inactive
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argonaut wrote: Yeah, that was pretty awesome, but the scene in the tavern was my favorite.

If Lfan wants to revive the 1000-word story workshop, a good subject might be "A superwoman walks into a bar ..."


Superwomen + alcohol = fun times for all.

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08 Aug 2011 08:18 #24288 by Dr. Muttonchops
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Thanks, guys! I'm glad that you liked it! :woohoo:

Sorry that I disappointed you with the last one, Argo, but I'm glad that I satisfied you with this one! This story would've been nothing without your great suggestions! I should tell you that in the one or two stories I have planned down the road, Superwoman is herself for most of the tale.

DietSnapple: I'm glad that you liked that bear fight scene! A commissioned illustration of it is in the works!

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08 Aug 2011 08:28 #24289 by yaracyrrah
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I loved this one!
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08 Aug 2011 09:07 #24290 by Dr. Muttonchops
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Thanks, Yara! I appreciate it!

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08 Aug 2011 16:59 #24292 by Lastleaf
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Really, liked this one. I've been enjoying the more classic tones of the various stories, except for the last one which I think deviated from that a little, with Luthor's escape.

Also the illustration with the arctic monster needs a story :)

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08 Aug 2011 18:10 #24294 by Dr. Muttonchops
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Well, I just got tired of him getting thrown in jail, and I ran out of creative ways to do it.

That drawing was based on an actual Superman. I did do a story where I repeated the plot and I don't care to do another.

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09 Aug 2011 13:58 #24318 by Woodclaw
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argonaut wrote: Yeah, that was pretty awesome, but the scene in the tavern was my favorite.

If Lfan wants to revive the 1000-word story workshop, a good subject might be "A superwoman walks into a bar ..."


That would be very interesting.

I like the story too, even if I prefered the previous installments

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10 Aug 2011 16:29 #24341 by JKIJ
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I enjoyed this story. So many opportunities for Superwoman to do her thing. And I liked the bear battle (bear exit stage left, pursued by Superwoman).

I do wonder when, if ever, the villains will realise that they can't hurt Superwoman. It would be less fun if they did, though.

Thanks for the story.
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11 Aug 2011 21:48 #24370 by Dr. Muttonchops
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Thanks, JKIJ! I really appreciate it!

Yeah, it would make them less fun if that were the case.

You're very welcome.

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12 Aug 2011 16:21 #24386 by Artnico
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Good storie but, what a pity!
I'm sorry for not understanding the subtleties of the English language ... :(

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12 Aug 2011 19:50 - 12 Aug 2011 20:22 #24393 by argonaut
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Yes, this is one of those times when a little "suspension of disbelief" is necessary for the sake of a good story.

Realistically, the moment Superwoman entered the bar, the crooks would have put up their hands and said "Just tell us what you want."

But where's the fun in that?

During the Silver Age, crooks were always shooting at Superman, even though they knew he was bullet-proof -- just for the hell of it, I guess.

I remember a story where Superboy learned that some gangsters were planning to rob a Smallville bank. Since he had some other mission to perform, he asked a random teenager to put on a Superboy costume (and a rubber mask) and just stand in front of the bank to scare the robbers off. "You'll be perfectly safe," he assures the kid. "Those crooks won't shoot at you because they know that Superboy is invulnerable!"

(Strangely, Superboy was NOT named in a wrongful death lawsuit!)
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24 Aug 2011 04:48 - 24 Aug 2011 04:56 #24532 by Dr. Muttonchops
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Here's TGK's glorious illustration that I commissioned for the story.
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24 Aug 2011 06:10 #24534 by lfan
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Fantastic pic and coloring! Thanks for sharing!

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24 Aug 2011 06:23 #24535 by Dr. Muttonchops
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No prob!

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24 Aug 2011 20:52 #24546 by Woodclaw
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...... sorry drolling on the keyboard (I know it's gross), but that's a fantastic picture. My oly question is about Louis, I alway pictured him a bit tougher looking.
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24 Aug 2011 22:01 #24547 by JKIJ
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The picture looks great. As for how tough Louis looks, I think that given the circumstances he looks about right. I'm pretty sure that I'd look less than my best when I'm confronted by a bear that looks to be at least three times my size,
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24 Aug 2011 22:48 #24548 by Dr. Muttonchops
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Thanks, guys! I agree with you, Anon, that I'm not exactly crazy about how he draws guys, but, I agree with JKIJ that it's acceptable.

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25 Aug 2011 07:43 #24559 by Random321
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So I was trying to give a "+" on the Karma for you DrMuttonchops - but I miss clicked and hit the "minus" - now I have to wait six-twelve hours to fix it - sorry and no offense meant!

Love the stories and the pictures by TGK - I think he did a great job on the Bear.

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25 Aug 2011 08:06 #24560 by Dr. Muttonchops
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None taken, Random. I didn't even notice. Darn those wait times!! :angry: :laugh:

Yeah, he's something, all right.

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