Lady Nyx

Did I actually submit part 2 for publication? I hadn't thought so, but it's not like I've done anything with the series in, approximately, forever and a half.

Great story. Love both parts. Thank you Jabbrwock.

If you think it's worth publishing. I may be inspired to revisit it with a rewrite, though. Is it reasonably easy to replace the current version if I do so?

In any case, it's better that the stuff be posted on a reasonably active site where people can see and enjoy it than that it molder away in my HD archive or on a site that is presently moribund. Thus, I'm glad you revived it, even if I never do get to writing anything more in the series.

Hmm, after reading part two, I find it a shame that you never continued it, and that is mainly because you went in a, unexpected and semi-unique direction with it. I mean, I thought that this story would just be another 'Super Bad Girl' thing, and while they are fun and all, they can get boring after a bit, if you can't keep them fresh somehow. But you, by making her rediscover her, well, her humanity, gave this story a unique twist that I could see making this story interesting. There's nothing quite like a repentant heroine, especially one that is somehow 'programed' to be quite, nasty. Well, this was just my thoughts on your story, and while I do hope that you'll somehow find the inspiration to continue this, I'm not going to hold my breath for it. Well, thanks for ever writing what you did of this, and good bye for now.

I've read part one more than a few times over the years and enjoyed it. It's good to see more of the story and if any more is ever written I'd love to read it.

The reason I never wrote any more in the series is that I just could not write the next part. I know how to write some ubergirl action with my favorite hot bits. An episode about introspection and rebuilding a conscience is. . . well, beyond me. I know where I want to go, just not how to get there.

I never have given up on it, though.

Makes sense. Serious introspection can be, hard to do.

I've been rereading the 1st part for years and never knew that the 2nd exists. Thanks a lot