Michelle's Meteor Memento Part 6

"If you were at the very bottom of society and suddenly had superpowers, would you really continue to do what you were doing? No, you'd do whatever the hell you want."

Hehe - sounds like politicians too.

I loved the description of the game of catch and the balancing and flight powers used. Heat vision taking on the eye color is also a nice touch - I liked that. The Well done.

What a fun story to read.

Random321 wrote: Hehe - sounds like politicians too.

I loved the description of the game of catch and the balancing and flight powers used. Heat vision taking on the eye color is also a nice touch - I liked that. The Well done.

Can't think of many politicians who had such a rise, but yeah...

Glad you liked it.

Fun story. I like the continuing hints that they may not be the only super game in town.

geekseven wrote: Fun story. I like the continuing hints that they may not be the only super game in town.

Good thing I've got a few plans for this and thus I can drop some hints. Unfortunately the current pacing means that it'll take a while...

Btw the plot isn't set in stone yet, so I'm always open for suggestions or loud speculations

I enjoyed this part as much as the previous parts. The descriptions were vivid and the hints of at leat one other player behind the scenes were interesting. I'm now convinced that the prostitute was somebody's experiment, and I wouldn't be surprised if she died because she was trying to experience the same feelings as her previous "drug trip", only she didn't know that it wasn't her usual drug that caused what she felt.

JKIJ wrote: I enjoyed this part as much as the previous parts. The descriptions were vivid and the hints of at leat one other player behind the scenes were interesting. I'm now convinced that the prostitute was somebody's experiment, and I wouldn't be surprised if she died because she was trying to experience the same feelings as her previous "drug trip", only she didn't know that it wasn't her usual drug that caused what she felt.

That's the loud speculation I was talking about. And even though the story behind the prostitute is already decided, this gave me an idea how to make things a bit more interesting. It's strange to see how these ideas seem to fit perfectly into what I had already planned for the future.

Shameless "Get the topic back into the tracker in order to get a bit more feedback"-post

Only feedback I have to offer is that I love the story so far, to the extent that it's pretty much *THE* draw SWM has for me now. Not terribly constructive feedback, but hopefully at least motivational. Keep it up!

Jabbrwock wrote: Only feedback I have to offer is that I love the story so far, to the extent that it's pretty much *THE* draw SWM has for me now. Not terribly constructive feedback, but hopefully at least motivational. Keep it up!

Thanks, this really motivates to work on the next part