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23 Apr 2013 11:18 #31213 by Woodclaw

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It seem that our Library has hit a new moment of activity. We got the return of Dru, Pocketfull first story as part of the workshop and now a new author appears to contribute.

Please give a warm welcome to aki_zz and the two first chapters of Viona , the Mayan Warrior of Beauty

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23 Apr 2013 14:37 #31216 by lfan

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Welcome, Aki_zz! Cannot wait to see what's more to come!

ElF

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23 Apr 2013 17:34 #31217 by aki_zz

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Thank you very much! Lets all have fun! :woohoo:

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24 Apr 2013 10:30 #31225 by Woodclaw

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With incredible speed, Aki_zz provided us the final 3 chapters of Viona . As incredible as it might sound this first story is already shelf-worthy . This is probably a record for a first story by a new author :ohmy:

So sit back and enjoy.

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25 Apr 2013 17:56 #31238 by algae2k

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Apart from an occasional need for a proofreader, I agree completely; the story is great!

Any more stories coming for Viona?

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26 Apr 2013 12:52 #31256 by aki_zz

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thank you! sometimes i got confused about the grammar

perhaps in the future, when i got new ideas...

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26 Apr 2013 15:54 #31259 by Woodclaw

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aki_zz wrote: thank you! sometimes i got confused about the grammar

perhaps in the future, when i got new ideas...

Well Aki, maybe you should get yourself a couple of beta-readers, either ask in the chat room or put an announcement on the forum.

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26 Apr 2013 16:38 #31261 by aki_zz

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perhaps i should have done that in the first place

i was too...excited lol

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02 May 2013 00:38 #31336 by pansardum

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Just read through it and think it certainly had some great ideas. Sadly the execution left a bit to be desired. Mostly grammar and flow, nothing a good proof reader couldn't have helped you with.

Anyway I hope to see more of you and look forward to new stories (or maybe a continuation?)

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