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Armada: The all powerful Queen of Portland

30 May 2013 18:23 - 02 Jun 2013 19:20 #31760 by castor
Just posted the first chapter of the three part story.

Armada-All Powerful queen of Portland, and empress of the Portland metropolitan area(excluding Vancouver Washington). Anon had to shorten the title to fit into the site.

Hope you guys like it. Thanks for Dru for proofing it.

I will admit i originally came up with the story idea a couple years ago as a screenplay idea that i never actually wrote out. As such i think a little bit of it is convicenved more as a tradtional movie narrative with the kind of flow and beats of that more then as an ubergirl stoy.

However it is intended to kind of be a parody of stories that appear on here, with an all powerful Superwoman- who well after she takes over the city in the first page of the story has to figure out what to do with it. Some of the details of the story are also based on the kind of stories that appear on the old fasioned comic stories that appear a lot on Super dickery" blogs . I will admit one of the concepts in the last chapter i did take speiciially from another writer. I don't want to spoil it but i will credit it at the proper time.

As i was writing i did realize it may work as as an actual movie and curious what people whould think of it. By movie i suspect it would turn out to star like Kathrine Hiegl(its fundementally a rommantic comedy) but curious if anyone has thoughts on that.
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31 May 2013 15:03 #31768 by aki_zz
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castor wrote: Just posted the first chapter of the three part story.



However it is intended to kind of be a parody of stories that appear on here, with an all powerful Superwoman- who well after she takes over the city in the first page of the story has to figure out what to do with it. Some of the details of the story are also based on the kind of stories that appear on the old fasioned comic stories that appear a lot on Super dickery" blogs . I will admit one of the concepts in the last chapter i did take speiciially from another writer. I don't want to spoil it but i will credit it at the proper time.


as i read the story i'm smiling to myself and it does conform to my thoughts that it is a parody lmao. although i think it is still all over the place. anyway looking forward to the next installment. B)

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02 Jun 2013 16:11 #31781 by circes_cup
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This was a fun read , Castor! You and Drew are a good team. I'm looking forward to seeing how the plot thickens...

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02 Jun 2013 19:50 #31782 by SHTL
yes Circes I'm agree but i have to say we also all are waiting too for part 27-28 of your awesome story !!

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