Dwahahl

sorry my ability to do comments also got lost at some point. Ahh well.

i think its a fine story.

I guess when i read the original Dwahalahl it was a fun kind of take on the conan stries-but this one in particuarly is feeling more like a lovecraftian horror story-which kind of works as well-the kind of style is closer then you might think.A lot of the ideas here are kind of neat. Theres a bleakness to it which works for it, a kind of pitilessness to this supergirl who is just this other by the end of the story. its if nothing else neat.