Daylight

Theres only the final chapter left in the story, so its not going to be a super full one. but i hope people like the story, as it builds to its climax.

Thought i might as well include the link to the story by Rook that inspired it.

www.dangerbabecentral.com/xpage/stories/...eofthebeachbunny.htm

Its a sily story about the origins of a supeheroine who has gains her power from light-but also becomes a dumb nympomaniac. Read it a couple of years ago, and thought it was an interesting idea to play seriously. If your intrested you can compare the two

...And the Daylight story is finished.

Hope people like this somewhat untraditional story of the Ubergirl Genre. It was kind of fun to write a darker take on the genre and some of the ideas in it- but find...well a note of hope in it all.

Thanks to Dru agian for all his help.

Castor

with this story, for me it has further establish you as a writer who likes to explore subject from an acute angle, i mean your story is totally different from most of the story here. as for me, i literally have to grit my teeth to read your story(am i a masochist?), but keep doing what you are doing right now. it's like you are on a canoe, battling a stream

anyway, i hope keiko and daylight find peace and work with each other. reminds me of miss marvel and supergirl v4 . is this the hope that you are talking about?