New story deposited in StoryBank

Mikey:

Nice! Has the feel of the pilot episode of a TV series or the first issue of a comic. You've got a protagonist starting a new job in a new city -- you've got the beginnings of a supporting cast -- and you've laid the foundation for what I assume will be Lisa's transformation into a supergirl. (As I recall, several episodes of the "Lois & Clark" series used the "power-transfer-via-lightning" device.) I get the impression you've got the story plotted out for quite a few chapters to come. Looking forward to the next installment. (I'll try to read-and-respond sooner next time!)

Just read this one {bolt from the blue}. I'm GLAD I read it** ~ it wasn't what I expected from the title. I did the same plane depressurizing thing in one of my stories but this was executed much better than what I did.

Like Argonaut said ~ I enjoyed the building of the Lisa character and the set up for more story. I hope you continue this because I want to see how you take it in different directions from all the other power transfer and discovery stories I've always enjoyed (EG the early NSGIT chapters).

**I only got lucky enough to read it because I had a moment and this was a story I found that was formatted ~ rereading superjen was driving me nuts ~ meaning it doesn't scroll out to the right several screens.

I should have said this ages ago, but I appreciate the comments guys. I've sent off the rest of the story now that it's been reformatted. And finally finished the first chapter of the second story arc, but that will have to wait till I get a bit more backstory put into it before i start releasing it.