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Modifications chapter 7 ?
Someone is able to answer ?
Thanks a lot,
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I only recently managed to begin chapter 7 of Modifications. Chapter 6 of For Hire at one hundred and ninety pages turned out longer then I expected it to. At this moment I am 5 pages into chapter 7 of Modifications. It may be a month before I am able to send the entire chapter in.
Whadimiss! *sniffle* Y-your posting on other web sites? I'm so hurt, I only know of one way to fix the pain and anguish that fills my soul. Post a link to the story, and all will be forgiven.
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I just wanted to drop you a line to congratulate you on your fine work.
There are a few jarring punctuation/word use issues, but the use of conflicts
( avoid hurting people, not making strength too obvious ) and pacing
( invulnerability is introduced before strength )
is excellent.
/DrFranklin
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Now! Right this instant!When part 7 of "Modifications" from Happiest ?
Thanks Happiest in Shadows for sending us Chapter 7 of "Modification" - now downloadable from the StoryBank.
www.superwomenmania.com/storybank/index-d.html
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I only recently managed to begin chapter 7 of Modifications. Chapter 6 of For Hire at one hundred and ninety pages turned out longer then I expected it to. At this moment I am 5 pages into chapter 7 of Modifications. It may be a month before I am able to send the entire chapter in.
Whadimiss! *sniffle* Y-your posting on other web sites? I'm so hurt, I only know of one way to fix the pain and anguish that fills my soul. Post a link to the story, and all will be forgiven.
www.gts-depot.net, For Hire can be found there. However, while the main female characters are most assuredly strong it is a giantess story for the most part. So if you don't like your women above two meters tall you probably won't like it. If you still want to read it join the forums and check out the writer's nunery.
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