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Does anyone know a good place to get feed back?
22 Feb 2008 00:41 #11722
by happiest_in_shadows
Does anyone know a good place to get feed back? was created by happiest_in_shadows
Well I'm finally beginning work on my next super fem story however I have a bit of a problem. The people I tended to get feed back from are sort of disappearing which is a bit problematic. So I'm wondering. Does anyone know of a forum where I could maybe post three pages every other day and get some opinions on them? I'm hoping for some actual criticism not so much of my grammer or spelling but more along the lines of.
"That seemed somewhat out of character."
Any suggestions would be appreciated.
"That seemed somewhat out of character."
Any suggestions would be appreciated.
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22 Feb 2008 04:13 #11724
by argonaut
Replied by argonaut on topic Re: Does anyone know a good place to get feed back?
You could try posting pages in the "Story Ideas and Suggestions" forum or the "New and Aspiring Writers" forum. Feedback isn't guaranteed, but someone might be moved to respond.
Or you might submit your pages to Brawna.org -- the people there seem to be a little more forthcoming with feedback.
I'd like to see what you're working on. New fiction has been scarce on this forum lately (he said guiltily ...)
Or you might submit your pages to Brawna.org -- the people there seem to be a little more forthcoming with feedback.
I'd like to see what you're working on. New fiction has been scarce on this forum lately (he said guiltily ...)
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22 Feb 2008 07:39 #11725
by oldHarmonyMotion
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I was presumably writing a story as well, but that ended.
I'd be glad to offer feedback, but I don't know of what value it would be.
I'd be glad to offer feedback, but I don't know of what value it would be.
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22 Feb 2008 18:45 #11735
by Sarge395
Replied by Sarge395 on topic Re: Does anyone know a good place to get feed back?
Depending on what the story is about I'd be happy to review it.
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02 Mar 2008 18:12 #11801
by happiest_in_shadows
Replied by happiest_in_shadows on topic Re: Does anyone know a good place to get feed back?
The story is set within a fantasy setting. The basic start is that Princess Casandra is rather upset about her arranged marriage as there is another male she favors. Running away seems like a simple solution but she knows they'd be pursued. Without going into detail she effectively decides that it would be far better if she could convince her parents to call off the marriage and let her be with the one she wants.
Of course she knows the only way to do this is to gain the power needed to make them accept it.
Of course she knows the only way to do this is to gain the power needed to make them accept it.
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