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"Wow seriously, I can't believe you're doing this!" Jenny sat, mouth wide open as she watched her friend twirl a bowling ball on her pinky. "Linda, is it... is it heavy? Do you get tired?"

Linda thought about it, swaying her head back and forth as she continued to twirl the ball thoughtlessly. "No, I don't think so. I mean, it's just like breathing. I can do it without thinking, you know?"

Jenny couldn't believe what she was seeing. Linda flicked her arm up and sent the ball flying high into the air, only to catch it on another finger deftly, gently, absorbing the impact perfectly. She had a serene smile on her face.

Her face. At first, Jenny thought Linda was someone else. Maybe a close relative. The changes to each part of her body were subtle, but all together, the effect was overwhelming. Her brown eyes seemed brighter somehow, her hair long, flowing, and lustrous. She couldn't see a single flaw in her complexion.

Linda flicked the ball high into the air again, then pursed her lips and blew at it. The ball descended slowly on a cushion of her warm breath, as if connected to wires from the heavens. She stopped blowing and let the ball fall into the palm of her hand. She giggled at Jenny and skipped toward her. Jenny thought for a second that Linda was hovering.

"Do you want to see what else I can do?" Linda asked, as she put the ball down.

"You can do more?!" Jenny was incredulous.

Linda grinned. "Of course I can, silly!" She blew a short, playful breath at her friend to ruffle her hair. "Watch this!"

All of a sudden, Linda disappeared from view. Jenny was looking right at her, and she vanished. It took her a moment before she had even realized what had happened.

"Linda? Where are you? Eek!" A startled Jenny jumped a foot into the air from an unexpected tap on her shoulder. She turned around to see Linda, laughing playfully.

"I thought I told you to watch! Are you ready now?"

"What am I watching!"

"This!" Linda disappeared again.

Jenny turned around to see Linda standing there. She frowned. "I don't get it. Are you teleporting?"

Linda laughed. "Oh wow, I didn't realize I was THAT fast! Okay, one more time. Ready?"

Jenny blinked, and Linda was gone. She looked behind her again, only to see the bowling ball that Linda had spun like a basketball on her pinky. That'll probably be in a museum someday, she thought to herself.

Jenny looked all over the backyard, and even peeked inside the house. There was no sign of Linda.

"Hey Linda! Where are you! Are you invisible?"

She heard a muffled laugh from... above her? She craned her neck upward, and saw Linda's face, upside down, suspended in midair.

"Ahh!" Jenny fell on her butt. "You can fly!?"

Linda performed a slow somersault in the air to get herself right side up. "Yeah, I guess you could say that." She lowered herself and lifted Jenny back onto her feet. "Sorry if I'm being a little rough on you... you're the only person I wanted to tell."

It took Jenny a moment to realize that she wasn't sitting on the floor anymore. Linda had literally placed her on her feet. "Don't worry Lin, it'll be our secret. You're still the same person, right?"

"Oh Jenny!" Linda gave her a warm hug. Jenny winced for a second, preparing herself for an embrace like a vice, but Linda was as gentle as ever. Still, she could feel the changes in her body, even if Linda still dressed in her usual baggy clothes.

Linda had really filled out. She had always hidden her lack of figure with her taste in clothing. Jenny always reassured her that she was a late bloomer, that her curves would come, and now she had truly blossomed.

"Wow, Lin. Are you bigger there now?" Jenny asked, hugging her friend back.

Linda stepped back and turned a bright red. Jenny smiled. Same old Linda.

"Um... yeah, I am." Linda looked embarrassed. "This is gonna sound kinda arrogant, but you know me, right? I mean, it's like..." Linda sighed. "Okay, I'm just gonna say it. My body is out of this world now. Think Heidi Klum, times ten."

"What?! No way!" Jenny stared at her. Linda did look like her legs had gotten longer and leaner, but it was still hard to tell through her clothes.

"Actually... I think I made a guy come when I went shopping for clothes before you got here."

"Eww, Linda! You didn't!" This is new.

Linda flushed bright red again. "No, it's not what you think! I didn't touch him or anything. He was working at the mall, and you know, I was just trying out clothes. I stepped out for a second to grab something else off the rack, and I saw him staring at me, you know? I'm not used to being stared at, so I just kinda stared back at him."

"Yeah...?"

"Well, eventually I turned to go get what I was looking for. I walked on, but I could feel him still looking at me, breathing pretty hard, you know. And then, I think I heard him, well, you know." Linda didn't think it. She knew it.

"How do you know! No way! There's no way you can make a guy come like that!"

"No, I'm serious! My senses are pretty amped up. I KNOW he did!"

"Come on, Linda. I mean, I can see you're probably like, a supermodel now, but this is a superpower I don't think you have."

Linda bobbed up and down a foot from the ground, exasperated at her friend. Then, she got an idea. "Okay Jenny, I'll show you."

"What!? Are you gonna go find a guy now? This is gross!"

"No no! I just wanna show you what I look like now, okay?"

"Okay yeah! I wanna see!" The new and improved Linda. Jenny felt a twinge of jealousy, but she was glad for her friend.

"Okay, check this out." Linda pulled her baggy clothes back so they fit tightly on her skin. Her profile was astonishing. A large bust, an unbelievably small waist. Jenny thought she could even see a hint of Linda's toned abs.

"Wow Lin..." Jenny had to admit, it was pretty breathtaking.

Linda snapped her fingers. It sounded like a cannonball being fired. "I have a better idea." She vanished and reappeared in the halter that she was wearing in the store. "See?"

Jenny's jaw dropped. Seeing Linda's profile was one thing, but this... she couldn't decide what she wanted to focus on more, Linda's slender waist, her taut tummy, her full breasts, the small gap between them, her long arms, her smooth shoulders... Jenny felt herself begin to drool. She quickly tried to restrain herself.

Linda smiled. It seemed she had this superpower after all. "Now let me complete the ensemble." She vanished and reappeared again, wearing a pair of tight jeans.

Linda twirled around and posed, one fist on her hip. "Tada!"

Jenny visibly gulped. Linda's tiny waist flared into her wide hips. She couldn't tell where Linda's legs began; they seemed to go on forever. Jenny followed Linda's long, long legs down, tracing the lines of perfect feminine muscle, down to her slender ankles and pretty feet. So this is what she looks like after puberty. Jenny trailed her eyes slowly back up Linda's body before they rested on svelte abs.

"Hey, earth to Jenny!" Linda smirked, like a tigress playing with her prey.

"Huh, uh, yeah." Jenny shook her head to try to cool down. No, it wasn't her head that was getting warm. She felt the flush of arousal in her chest, between her legs. Oh God, am I wet down there? She looked at Linda again.

Linda sauntered over, one long leg in front of the other. She took her time walking over, swaying her hips, letting her breasts bounce. Jenny was completely enthralled. Linda could hear Jenny's heart racing. She could smell Jenny's arousal in the air.

She now stood face to face with Jenny. Jenny watched Linda's mouth as she spoke the next few words in sexiest voice she had ever heard.

"It's..."

Jenny watched Linda's lips open and close.

"okay..."

Her tongue playing over those perfect lips.

"to..."

Her warm breath all around her.

"come."

Jenny let loose a primal, sexual groan. She took sharp, shallow breaths as she stood there, coming. She reached out for Linda as she felt her knees give way. Linda caught her effortlessly, letting her body grind against Jenny's. A new orgasm rushed through Jenny as she inhaled the scent of Linda's hair, felt the touch of Linda's skin. She cried out again.

"Shh..." Linda whispered into Jenny's ear, nibbling her earlobe. Jenny bucked again, felt another orgasm take its course, and then blacked out.

Super! A story that certainly will become one of my favorites. I was just finished your other post again (which was a start to this) and I can say for sure that you got talent and this story is awesome.

Hoping to read more...

Very nicely done. More please .

Jenny woke up fifteen minutes later, in Linda's bed. She could still feel the drain that the multiple orgasms had caused her body. Shifting her legs, she felt a definite squish in her panties.

"You're awake!" Linda smiled. She got up from her dresser. Jenny noticed small piles of ashes on her desk.

Linda's feet left the ground as she hovered horizontally over the bed, a few feet above Jenny. "Well, do you believe me now?"

"L-Linda..." Jenny stammered, "that was a little strange."

Linda sighed, her warm breath enveloping and comforting Jenny now, instead of arousing her. "I know, but we always shared everything. Remember when we used to kiss each other to figure out how it was done?"

"Yeah..."

"I thought it would be sort of like that, you know?" Linda's lip quivered as she felt herself tear up a little. "Please, please don't be mad."

Jenny noticed the change and immediately tried to placate her. If she ever wanted to feel this way again, she'd have to reassure Linda right now. "Actually, I was hoping, uh..." She coughed. "That-you-could-do-it-again-sometime," she managed all in one breath.

"Really!?" Instantly Linda burst into a smile. Her friendship would be okay. How did anyone ever got along without a friend like this?

Jenny threw Linda's covers off her as she moved to get out of bed. She realized that she would have to do something about her pants and panties before she went outside. They were completely soaked through. Jenny had no idea she could come like that.

"Hey Lin, could you let me borrow some of your clothes?" Jenny grinned sheepishly as she pointed to her crotch.

"Sure thing. Take em off." Linda floated next to the bed and landed on her feet. She stood there, waiting.

"Could you not watch me? A girl's gotta have some privacy, you know!"

Linda giggled. "Oh please. You don't want me to see your day of the week panties, is that it?" Jenny was aghast. "By the way, it's not Wednesday. Do your privates know that?"

"How did you!" Jenny looked down... she was completely covered up.

"I don't know if even lead can stop these baby blues." Linda smiled as her eyes shone bright, piercing right through Jenny's clothing.

"Are you looking at me right now?! You can see through my clothes?!" Jenny quickly pulled the covers over herself, but Linda just laughed harder.

"That's not gonna help, you know. Besides, it's not like I haven't seen you before."

Jenny sat there before finally bursting out into laughter. "Okay fine!" She threw the covers off and jumped onto her feet, fully clothed. "Here I am, in the nude!"

The two friends stood there in Linda's bedroom, getting a good laugh. It was the first time they had laughed like this ever since Linda's demonstration of powers. Everything's going to be all right, Linda thought.

After the laughter died down, Jenny finally stripped and handed her clothes to Linda as she waited in bed. She watched Linda take her clothes into the sink, vigorously scrub them, her hands becoming a blur. She wrung the water out of them and took the clothes, still thoroughly wet, into the bedroom.

"Okay, I have a few things left to show you," Linda informed Jenny.

"More!?"

"Yeah, almost done." Linda held Jenny's pants at arms length and focused her eyes. The air sizzled as laser beams shot out of Linda's eyes. She traveled her gaze up and down until the pants were completely dry. "That'll be 15 bucks," Linda quipped as she tossed the jeans back to Jenny. She did the underwear the same way.

Jenny looked on, amazed. There really was no limit to Linda's powers. She glanced back at the ash on top of Linda's dresser, making the connection. "How hot can you get it?"

"Oh I don't know, I've mostly just been burning pieces of paper. But as you can see, I have pretty good control too."

"Yeah, at least I still have my clothes." Jenny got up and began to dress herself. She began to feel a warm spot on her backside. She turned around and saw two red beams emerging from Linda's eyes, now focusing on her stomach. "Hey!"

Linda giggled. "Oops! My aim was too high!" She narrowed her eyes, this time right over Jenny's vagina.

"Aaah! Linda!"

"Hey, there's one more thing I need to tell you about, but you already know it." Linda began to take off her clothes.

"Oh god Lin, are you gonna do it to me again?"

"Not if you don't want it." Linda pulled off her halter in one swift motion and unclasped her bra. Jenny noticed how high and pert Linda's breasts were, but she didn't find herself yearning for Linda's touch.

"Oh my god, your tits are unreal! They're so high, even without a bra! But how come I'm not totally speechless?" Jenny remembered how Linda had been fully dressed, and yet she had been unable to form any coherent thoughts at all, just an overwhelming desire to see more of Linda.

"It's hard to explain," Linda responded matter of factly. She took off her pants, now standing only in her underwear. "It's like I have tons of control over my body. I can heat it up with my eyes or cool it down if I want to, but I can even keep it at normal temperature. I can decide what it does, you know? And the same goes for turning you on. Can you imagine how super awkward it would be if my parents saw me like that? I'd never be able to talk to them again!"

"So that guy in the store..."

"That was a total accident. I had no idea it could be like that." Linda smiled at Jenny now, turning on a bit of her charm. She rubbed her pussy through the outside of her panties, letting her scent fill the air. "Well? Do you want another one? Say nothing if you do."

Jenny's pants lay at her feet. She couldn't get a single word out. She felt like she was being manipulated by her friend, but it wasn't bad if her friend was just making her feel good, was it? Any such treacherous thoughts completely evaporated though, as Linda bit her lower lip seductively and flashed a sultry gaze at Jenny. Jenny quickly nodded her approval.

Linda smiled as she moved with purpose, not mesmerizing Jenny with her stroll this time. She sucked on her fingers, then placed them on Jenny's slit. God, she was so wet already, and the friction between her clit and Linda's super fingers felt so good.

Linda leant in to kiss Jenny. The feeling of her lips was pure pleasure as she began to move her fingers up and down, up and down. Jenny felt Linda's tongue massage hers forcefully. She tried to push back against it, but Linda gave no ground.

As Linda's fingers began to vibrate faster and faster, Jenny felt her orgasm rapidly approaching. Linda threw her free arm around Jenny's waist and held her fast. She broke off the kiss as her fingers continued to take Jenny to new heights. Jenny began to quiver. She couldn't hold it in anymore.

Linda stared straight into her eyes, her lips curling into a smile. Get ready, Jenny. "Now," said Linda, as she stuck out her tongue and give Jenny's lips one last lick. She finished off Jenny with one final stroke of her fingers. Jenny stood there, trembling in Linda's gentle, unbreakable hold, her juices splashing onto Linda's perfect hand every time her body spasmed.

Thanks Goobers. This is great stuff so far. Linda seems to be a good girl. Looking forward to more of your work.

Yeah let me voice my support too. This is a great little piece - right up my alley. And there's room for it to grow into something truly awesome. Hope you keep it up!

To elaborate - when I was writing Serena's story all that long time ago, I was also trying to write about these kinds of super-sexual powers that would go along with the strength & the flying, etc. But I didn't quite nail it the way you did, and I got frustrated & went off track.

I do want to see you keep going with this one because it's that sort of power of ultimate beauty that is the driving force of my interest in this genre -- much more so than strength or flying or anything else.

Yosh: ditto, I thought you did a great job with Serena!

I think I have the same tastes as you. In fact, now that you mention it, our stories do have a lot of similarity (hopefully not too much...)

In fact, now that you mention it, our stories do have a lot of similarity (hopefully not too much...)

Too much of a good thing is... excellent!

Fine stuff goobers, keep 'em coming!

Love it!!! More please!!!

This story is great. And Yosh, we all think you did a great job with Serena ^^ Hopefully that inspiration you need comes soon so you continue the series. But hey, even if we all think you did great, I cant deny that you didnt get what you were looking for, even if it was a good story, you think you could have done better. Am I in the ball park here?

I've got to agree with everybody else. This is a fine story following up to a good beginning (though I do wonder, will we see at some point how Linda got from discovering her powers to this point?).

I do look forward to more.

I've got to agree with everybody else. This is a fine story following up to a good beginning (though I do wonder, will we see at some point how Linda got from discovering her powers to this point?).

I do look forward to more.

I just write whenever I get an idea. These will probably be disjoint pieces that may not even fit together in the long run.

Hmm, is this a countiuation of your last set of sippits form 2007? Sure seems like it is. Anyways, this is great and I enjoyed it, so, thanks for taking the time to write this, bye for now.

"Bye Mom, bye Dad, I'm gonna miss the bus!" Linda shouted as she rushed out the front door, dressed in her usual all too baggy clothes.

She boarded the school bus and found Jenny saving her usual seat. Some of the other high schoolers did a double take as she walked by; Linda grinned in satisfaction. The clothes hid her figure, but her face was still perfect. Maybe she would have to do something about that later.

"Hey Lin, did you do the math homework? What'd you get on 12?" Jenny asked.

"Hang on." Linda pulled a blank sheet of paper out of her backpack and began writing.

"You didn't do it?! This calc stuff is pretty hard, do you wanna copy mi...," Jenny started to say, but she suddenly felt a finger against her lips. With one finger, Linda kept Jenny quiet as she looked at her math book through her backpack. Her right hand became a blur as line after line appeared, neatly printed. She finished the assignment in seconds, every answer correct.

Linda winked at Jenny. "Yeah, I got 12. By the way," Linda's eyes glowed as she peered at Jenny's homework, "You might wanna double check your answer to 15." She gave Jenny's lips a parting caress as she removed her finger, allowing Jenny to speak.

The two friends had understandably grown closer over this life-changing weekend, when Linda had revealed her abilities to Jenny. Jenny had watched Linda demonstrate her newfound powers with fascination and interest, not shying away or getting freaked out. Linda was so relieved to be able to share her secret with the best friend she'd had since she was a child.

Jenny took out her homework and quickly fixed what she had done wrong. "So, what are your plans? Are you gonna take over the school with your little toe?"

Linda giggled. "No, I'd probably get in trouble for walking around barefoot."

"At least tell me you'll blow down the auditorium."

Their plans for high school domination were cut short as the bus brought them to the front steps. Linda's first class was PE. It was her least favorite class; she hated getting sweaty and then having to endure the rest of the day like that, but now a ten mile run wouldn't even have her breathing hard.

Too late did she realize that there were other complications; her plan to remain in the background as she always had would not work. She had to change into her PE clothes in the girls' locker room. Her shorts rode a little higher now thanks to her longer, leaner legs, and her t-shirt was just a bit too tight. With her superhearing, she picked up whispers among the girls about how the school wallflower seemed to have blossomed overnight. She watched in horror as some girls pretended to pop her breasts like balloons.

It was endurable at first. With walls no longer a boundary to her vision, Linda spent a lot of time spying on the teachers. The principal had a flask of bourbon in his desk drawer. Sometimes, during lunch, he and the secretary would have a quick screw in his office. Her English teacher kept a journal where he wrote erotic fiction about superhuman women. Linda enjoyed that one. She couldn't wait to try out some of his crazy ideas. Was it even possible to make a funnel of water by spinning?

Still, the rumors were spreading. Some of the girls began giving her ugly looks. The boys whistled when they passed her and made some lewd jiggling motions with their hands. Jenny tried to stop the rumors, but she couldn't change anything.

The torment only continued through the week. Linda stood at her locker, looking at an ad for a boob job that someone had taped to it. She wanted to scream in frustration. She could knock people out with her pinky and make them fear her, or even make the entire school submit to her sexually. Instead, she stood at her locker and tore her entire notebook in half.

In her rage, Linda hadn't noticed one of the football players approaching her. He leaned against the locker next to hers. "Hey babe, are you frustrated that nobody's appreciating your toys? Trust me, I can be very appreciative." She saw him look back toward the rest of the team as they all snickered. The team egged him on.

"Is it true they sink? Do you sink in a swimming pool now?" He laughed as he began to put his shoulder around Linda.

Linda's arm shot out as her dainty fingers grabbed his hand. Slowly, she began to apply pressure to his knuckles. He was shocked by the sudden movement, and now he was trying not to show the discomfort that he was in just from her casual grip. Some tears began to form in his eyes as her grip tightened.

Linda intended to leave some damage. This was the last straw. But just before she broke any bones, someone familiar came forward and gave the football player a shove.

"Hey! Why don't you leave her alone and go jerkoff with your football buddies?"

Linda quickly let go of his hand and beside her to see none other than her biggest crush, Chris. The football player cradled his hand and whimpered away.

"Bunch of assholes. What did he say to you?" He asked her.

Linda couldn't believe it. Chris was talking to her? She was still dressed the way she always was, and he must've heard the rumors... "Nothing. Just what you would expect them to say, I guess," she replied sheepishly.

"It's not true, right? The rumors, I mean." Linda shook her head. "Yeah, I didn't think so. I hate those guys."

"They're probably going to cause trouble for you, you know," Linda warned him. "But... thanks."

Chris smiled at her. "I gotta run. See you later, okay?"

Linda watched Chris as he left. She breathed a sigh of relief as she calmed her nerves down. She had almost done something really bad because she lost control of her temper. If Chris hadn't come around... well, from now on, she'd learn to control herself.

When the final bell rang, Jenny and Linda were walking out of the main exit when they saw none other than a few players from the football team impeding Chris' path. One of the players gave him a hard shove.

"Hey, your knight in shining armor is in trouble!" Jenny pointed out.

"He'll be fine." Linda reassured Jenny. She had a mischievous gleam in her eye.

Chris recovered his footing and shoved the other guy right back. Linda puckered up and blew a short, sharp breath right at the bully. His feet left the ground as he flew backward and collapsed into a heap. The entire crowd was stunned.

Linda took this chance to move at superspeed and tie another one's shoelaces together. She reappeared next to Jenny before anyone even realized she had moved. Then, she narrowed her eyes and completely disintegrated the bottom of another guy's backpack. His belongings fell all over the floor.

By now, all of them had decided to rush Chris. The one with his shoelaces tied together tripped and fell on his palms and face. Only three left now. Linda focused her eyes once more, focusing on their shoes. Immediately, all three of them felt the burn and began jumping up and down on the spot. Chris nailed one of them in the chest, and he fell to the floor, desperately trying to remove his shoes.

Linda could barely contain her laughter. Now this was a much healthier way of getting rid of anger! She trotted up from behind the players and gave him a light one handed shove, sending him to the floor. Grabbing a hold of Chris' arm, she asked him sweetly, "Are you okay?"

Chris just looked at the players in disbelief. All of them were either too stunned to move or too busy trying to get their shoes off. He looked at the one he had shoved twenty feet backward. "Yeah, I'm fine, I guess."

"Good, let's get out of here." Linda looked back at Jenny, who just gave her a wink and mouthed, "Go! Go!" With her arm still wrapped around his, they left for the school parking lot.

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I don't know about this installment, the flow of time really bothers me

Ah, it was ok, I liked it just fine, and with the interducion of Chris, I feeling more and more like, yes, this IS a contoinuation of your last snipit set. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.

I like that she's keeping her sweetheart qualities & not devolving into some power-mad bitch. I mean... I guess I like a good power-mad bitch as much as the next guy... but we could use some more sweeties around here to balance the scales. Keep it up!

Does anyone have any criticism from purely a writing standpoint? Is the dialogue okay? Does the story flow well? Are the pronouns ambiguous sometimes? Stylistic suggestions?

I don't have any problems with this from a writing standpoint, though I don't think I'm the best person to ask. I've never been much use as a critic of anybody's work other than my own. I certainly think the dialogue works fine and I think it flows fine and is readily understandable. I wish I could say more. It does feel inadequate at times to say I liked it (though I certainly did).

Your dialog works and you've done a good job of getting in Linda's head.

Really, the primary reason most stories fall apart is well, story. Your way of writing sort of a chapter at a time seems to work for you so don't change things, but recognize that Linda's superpowers won't save her if you take her into places that don't make any sense in the world of your story.

She was a super sweet kid before she got her powers and the powers really haven't change who she is inside. Well, not much and that slow change in Linada is one thing you are doing right. Most of us could get away with a lot of things and not get caught - often there is absolutely no way we would be caught - but most people don't do it. So, congrats for keeping her sane and sweet.

I would suggest that you continue plowing ahead when the mood strikes and then sit down and try to stich it into a larger whole if you want to. That's all your call, but really there is no writing only re-writing. However, that often takes all the fun out of it, so do whatever you want.

However, I would try keep her challenged, because most of these stories get old because the character has no challenge. Even if that challenge is to be sweet and nice and not use her powers that is huge.

Anyhow, great work.

However, I would try keep her challenged, because most of these stories get old because the character has no challenge. Even if that challenge is to be sweet and nice and not use her powers that is huge.

Anyhow, great work.

That pretty much nails the problem on the head. It's rather funny; the thing which we desire most in our women is that they are completely invincible and everything comes easy to them. As a result, it's hard to come up with a story with any sort of conflict, short of creating other equally invincible women.

I enjoy the slow changes she is going through and the fact she is remaining sweet for now. Like seeing the fury and power start to bubble through at times. I like bad girls overall but your story so far is great.