A Day in the Military Chapter IV

Part IV is now up, concluding the Day in the Military and making the series worthy of an own Category in our Series Library

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thank yu Camille, great story ending !

Thank you for the Chapter 4 of A Day In The Military. Great story. What will happen next? Hmmmm.....

That will be all written after I finish Origins. I tend to travel back and visit on some things I have yet to touch up/re-work before I proceed into the future.

But I appreciate the feedback so far Any other feedback is welcomed, whether you like it or somethings I should work on better. Also, any questions are welcomed too!

Theres a nice optimism to the story. Thats the thing that struck me. You do a good job of creating a character thats feels lived in and realistic while still suggesting a kind of innocence and joy to the world.

Beyond any of the super feats kind of stuff, that whats strike me about it

It was intresting to compare it to "fragile bindings" which has a similar plotline, but is a fairly depressing story about a character with infinite power who is clearly doomed and misserable at it. Its also a good story in its own way but the contrast is stark.


keep at it is what i say:)