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21 May 2014 19:26 #36529 by lojack
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Interesting start, awaiting to see how things go. Obviously there will be super-ness, curious as to how much. Was the S.A.M. supposed to be 'traditional' for super soldiers, aka strength of 10-20 and Priya is having a freaky long odds reaction? Or is it a special mixture just for her because of family? Also looking forward to a reaction where before she was nervous about a pin prick, and now an ICBM impact isn't even a bother.

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21 May 2014 20:00 #36531 by lojack
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BTW larafan, thewisewatcher- your serum reminded me of this!

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21 May 2014 20:06 #36532 by lfan
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Wow! Nice, Lojack....I can honestly say I've never seen that one before! As for the formula in our story, the background of it as well as its effect on Priya will be discussed and explained in subsequent chapters.....

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21 May 2014 20:16 #36533 by lojack
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You know me, all sorts of random supergirl info in my noggin.

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22 May 2014 02:55 #36537 by thewisewatcher
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wow that is a freaky coincidence but thanks for the SG factoid. Glad to see you're enjoying it, more to come

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26 May 2014 18:35 #36626 by lfan
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Part 2 is up now.....come and get it!

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26 May 2014 20:04 #36627 by fats
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Part 2 has been unpublished it will be back up later when lfan fixes a few problems with the story.

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26 May 2014 23:39 #36630 by lfan
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Ok.....take 2. Story is back and posted. Seems that something caused the original to be reformatted strangely which -- while wasn't really noticeable -- caused several words to be truncated making it VERY confusing. Should be better now.

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27 May 2014 09:09 #36637 by Woodclaw
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lfan wrote: Ok.....take 2. Story is back and posted. Seems that something caused the original to be reformatted strangely which -- while wasn't really noticeable -- caused several words to be truncated making it VERY confusing. Should be better now.

ElF


I've double checked the version I saved on my HD while reformatting, apparently it was some weird copy-paste bug that happened on my word processor, apologies.

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27 May 2014 12:59 #36638 by lfan
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No worries....I used alot of elipsys (looks like some big with them) in this chapter for some reason, and it made the problem a lot worse that it should have been. Thanks

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lfan wrote: Ok.....take 2. Story is back and posted. Seems that something caused the original to be reformatted strangely which -- while wasn't really noticeable -- caused several words to be truncated making it VERY confusing. Should be better now.

ElF


I've double checked the version I saved on my HD while reformatting, apparently it was some weird copy-paste bug that happened on my word processor, apologies.

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28 May 2014 02:24 #36650 by lojack
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Glad it wasn't me then losing my reading ability! :laugh:

Hmmm, Day 2 seems to be turning out nicely, I'd expect low superhuman range in strength tests at this point based off of the running earlier. Say 1-2 ton range press. Figure Day 3 is where she gets up early after her rebuild cycle and sneaks to the motor pool to have fun with 'real' weight, which will probably be like toys come the next day... :whistle: I do like the fact that she's enjoying it so much, but really why wouldn't you? She does appear to be a leap first, look later gal now that she is augmented, can only imagine how nigh invulnerabilty affects that.

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28 May 2014 02:26 #36651 by lojack
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BTW, is this at all relevant to this story?

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28 May 2014 03:54 #36652 by lfan
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lojack wrote: BTW, is this at all relevant to this story?

Priya


I'll plead the fifth and let WiseWatcher answer that one! ;)

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29 May 2014 00:03 #36655 by thewisewatcher
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lojack wrote: BTW, is this at all relevant to this story?

Priya


Wow, nothing gets past anyone on these boards lol. That was an old commission of what we thought Priya was going to look like. Since then LFAN and I have tweaked her look a bit.

What do you think about the commission lojack?
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29 May 2014 05:11 #36656 by lojack
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To be honest, I stumbled across it by accident on DA while bouncing links. But then noticed the name and that she was doing a feat of strength. His note said it was a commission for a novel, but I thought he might have meant story. The commissioner link went dead, and I didn't think any more of it, but then I thought I'd toss it to the board here just in case anyone had other info.

As for the art itself, I notice that he has feet and hand issues (in many of his pieces), more with feet than hands, but in this piece, the right hand looks to bend the wrong way, and the left hand looks meat blobby. If they are meant to be embedded in the rock, he forgot to denote rock details to that effect.

Other than that, I do like her expression, but am dismayed as to whether this is a 2 ton pebble, or a 20000 ton chunk of acreage? :lol:

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29 May 2014 08:18 #36658 by Woodclaw
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thewisewatcher wrote:

lojack wrote: BTW, is this at all relevant to this story?

Priya


Wow, nothing gets past anyone on these boards lol. That was an old commission of what we thought Priya was going to look like. Since then LFAN and I have tweaked her look a bit.


Well, it's still possible to re-use it as a cover picture for the story ;)

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29 May 2014 12:55 #36659 by lfan
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Woodclaw wrote:

thewisewatcher wrote:

lojack wrote: BTW, is this at all relevant to this story?

Priya


Wow, nothing gets past anyone on these boards lol. That was an old commission of what we thought Priya was going to look like. Since then LFAN and I have tweaked her look a bit.


Well, it's still possible to re-use it as a cover picture for the story ;)


Oh, I'm working on something for that. ;)

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19 Aug 2014 14:07 #37793 by lfan
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Just an FYI that Sensational Part 3 just posted (finally)! Hope y'all enjoy it and sorry for the delay!

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19 Aug 2014 15:17 #37794 by thewisewatcher
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lfan wrote: Just an FYI that Sensational Part 3 just posted (finally)! Hope y'all enjoy it and sorry for the delay!

ElF


Let's hope from the delay comes YAY

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26 Aug 2014 17:23 #37888 by thewisewatcher
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Eager to hear what the rest of the community thinks of our update so far

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27 Mar 2015 16:24 - 27 Mar 2015 16:25 #41161 by lfan
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Just a note that the long-overdue SENsational - Part IV has just been posted. It's our longest chapter yet, so hopefully it was worth the wait. Love to hear what y'all think.....

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27 Mar 2015 19:24 #41164 by thewisewatcher
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Agreed. We had a bit of a break and want to see what the other users here think

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29 Mar 2015 22:52 #41188 by oldHarmonyMotion
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I went and reread from the beginning. Love it! Really want to know where the story is headed and where the conflict will be
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30 Mar 2015 17:57 #41205 by Woodclaw
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Just a small heads-up for al of you: SENsational now has its own category in the Library and a cover picture is coming.

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30 Mar 2015 19:59 - 30 Mar 2015 21:38 #41207 by thewisewatcher
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WOW
that's awesome, looking forward to seeing it!
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