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20 Mar 2015 08:10 - 20 Mar 2015 10:30 #41064 by Monty
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Sarah's perusing the library shelves again.

"Hmmm....I should be in somewhere....HA! Got it!" :)

Next chapter up soon, when Sarah has put it back...


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20 Mar 2015 14:52 #41065 by lfan
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Monty wrote: Sarah's perusing the library shelves again.

"Hmmm....I should be in somewhere....HA! Got it!" :)

Next chapter up soon, when Sarah has put it back...


Just FYI, Chapter 6.....um, 5......well, the LATEST chapter has just been posted!

Njoy,
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21 Mar 2015 02:53 #41076 by www1969
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Anybody else seeing a slight formatting problem? I can't see the last few characters of any long line, making the whole thing difficult to read.

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22 Mar 2015 11:54 #41109 by Woodclaw
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www1969 wrote: Anybody else seeing a slight formatting problem? I can't see the last few characters of any long line, making the whole thing difficult to read.


I'll check it immediately.

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22 Mar 2015 12:50 #41110 by Woodclaw
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Woodclaw wrote:

www1969 wrote: Anybody else seeing a slight formatting problem? I can't see the last few characters of any long line, making the whole thing difficult to read.


I'll check it immediately.


After a bit of testing there's nothing wrong from my end. I reformatted the whole story just to be sure.

Does anyone else have the same problem as www1969's?

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22 Mar 2015 14:42 #41114 by www1969
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Well, it turns out to probably have more to do with my monitor than your formatting, because I just checked on another computer, and it's fine there. Still, It's very, very weird because it's just that page. All the other library stories appear fine on my original monitor.

To give you a reference point, note at the top right of any story in the library the options to "Recommend" or "Print". When I open Chapter Six Five of ENERGIZE, I only see that area as far as "Recomm". That second 'm' hits the far right edge of my monitor, and proportionally, that much of the entire story is hidden to me. There's not even a scroll bar on the bottom to let me scroll over to see the rest of the line, which would be an inconvenience but at least allow me to see the words that have been cut off.

I appear to be the only one having this problem, and as I said I can get it another way, so don't spend a lot of time futzing with it.

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22 Mar 2015 15:02 #41116 by fats
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can you let me know what operating system you are using and what version of what browser you are using, there could be a quick fix for your problems.

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24 Mar 2015 07:20 #41136 by Monty
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Sarah makes a startling Discovery with boyfriend Mark; Not before Emma makes an astonishing Discovery all of her own...with someone else also making a New Discovery!...Chapter Six, soon to follow....


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24 Mar 2015 14:47 #41137 by lfan
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just FYI....chapter 6 now up and posted.....

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25 Mar 2015 22:18 #41146 by www1969
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Again, it's not worth the bother. I use a preposterously old computer and an obscure browser, and pretty much only use it for goofing around on the internet. When something goes wrong, it's no great loss.

Interesting to note, though, that both Ultrapunzel Chapter Two and ENERGIZE Actual-Chapter-Six both work just fine.

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26 Mar 2015 07:48 #41151 by Monty
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www...do you want pdf's of some chapters sent to you? Message me your e-mail and Sarah or Emma will sort it... ;)

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26 Mar 2015 13:06 #41153 by Woodclaw
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www1969 wrote: Again, it's not worth the bother. I use a preposterously old computer and an obscure browser, and pretty much only use it for goofing around on the internet. When something goes wrong, it's no great loss.

Interesting to note, though, that both Ultrapunzel Chapter Two and ENERGIZE Actual-Chapter-Six both work just fine.


I've tried a number of times to reproduce this, but I couldn't manage, sorry.

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27 Mar 2015 02:13 #41157 by www1969
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Monty wrote: www...do you want pdf's of some chapters sent to you? Message me your e-mail and Sarah or Emma will sort it... ;)


As much as it excites me to think of Sarah giving me her personal attention (Emma actually scares me a little), I must once again stress that it's all really OK. I have no idea why that one story out of the entire library decided to behave a little wonky on my wonky computer, but I read that story on another computer and, so far anyway, whatever this weird problem is seems to have been isolated to that single story.

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29 Mar 2015 10:43 - 02 Jan 2022 12:46 #41180 by Monty
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Sarah is trying to Recover from her Discovery. Clare makes yet another New Discovery and Emma...

Well Emma is Discovering new Discoveries All The Time, as a very lucky  boy from her school gets his cherry stolen....








Chapter 7 Coming Soon...

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31 Mar 2015 10:54 - 31 Mar 2015 12:27 #41220 by Monty
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That super sexy minx Emma is nothing but Pure Energized Trouble!

She nearly got me the sack this morning! I'd deleted all the pics from a copy of ch7 and e-mailed it to my work address. Saved on my desktop at work, I quickly scrolled through the word doc....I only have crappy wordpad in the flat.

There she was! In THAT shower pic... :blink: on my screen at work! HOLY SH... as I quickly scrolled past..The Project Manager at the photocopier had briefly turned her head...did she see what she thought she saw?
I had definitely deleted those pics last night... True story from about half an hour ago...I KID YOU NOT!!!!
And sent from my phone...not my workstation...phew...
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31 Mar 2015 21:44 #41232 by AuGoose
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You'll have to work a little of that in. Maybe someone has been secretly photographing one or more of the gel-club, and the pictures (nearly) get them in trouble.

And here's a little "more" of Emma via the miracle of photoshop B).

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01 Apr 2015 07:00 #41249 by Monty
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Thanks Goose! Nice Re-Energize! on Emma in the bar stool pic there ... I'll maybe have to borrow that for the re-sub. ;)

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02 Apr 2015 21:48 - 02 Apr 2015 21:58 #41292 by Monty
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Emma has another bite at her new lover's cherry - Hey! she's a Super-Energized! girl...she can do what she wants! ;)

Meanwhile, there are developments in Clare's log cabin...

Revised Chapter Seven, Up Soon....!


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03 Apr 2015 06:33 #41299 by AuGoose
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I like the adjustments :). The tilt makes her even more flirty.

Looking forward to the update!
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03 Apr 2015 10:56 - 04 Apr 2015 06:56 #41303 by Monty
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Many Thanks to Woodclaw for Re-Energizing Chapter 7.

The Sex Goddess Emma is back with a twist...and not just in lucky Craig's dreams...


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03 Apr 2015 17:02 - 03 Apr 2015 17:14 #41309 by AuGoose
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As requested~


(looks like there may be some formatting quirks in the revised cap 7 - Emma's last scene is entirely in italics.)

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03 Apr 2015 17:27 #41310 by Woodclaw
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AuGoose wrote: As requested~


(looks like there may be some formatting quirks in the revised cap 7 - Emma's last scene is entirely in italics.)


The last scene was left in italics at Monty's request, that's how he wrote it.

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03 Apr 2015 17:33 #41311 by AuGoose
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Woodclaw wrote: The last scene was left in italics at Monty's request, that's how he wrote it.


Ahh. All good then :). Carry on!

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06 Apr 2015 13:32 - 09 Apr 2015 10:53 #41351 by AuGoose
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How the Little Tub met Its Fate...
(and a new goddess is born)

An ENERGIZE! sidebar
Mad props to Monty!

“Hey! Wait! You forgot... your shampoohh...” she trailed off with a breathy Irish lilt. The stunningly stacked blonde had taken off at a dead run. Fiona would have called out her name but she didn’t know who it was. With a body like that they obviously ran in different circles at school. Wherever she was going, she meant to be there quick and wasn’t worried about abandoned hair products. A moment later Fiona heard what sounded like a sonic boom outside, shaking all the frosted windows in the girl’s locker room. America was weird.

Fiona looked at the tub. It wasn’t labeled, but the green stuff inside seemed kinda fizzy. Maybe it was a body wash and not shampoo? Still, green was her lucky color (d’uh) so she held on to it. She strolled into the school showers carrying the tub and wearing her racing suit from the P.E. period she’d just finished. She liked wearing it– its white and green lines did what they could for her lanky, tomboy body, but she was still pretty much a stick figure with pigtails drawn on top. She wasn't short (an impressive 5'10" actually), she was just skinny as the proverbial rail. She giggled at that. American boys pretty didn't even look at her if she kept quiet. Some actively disliked that she could look them in the eye. But they couldn’t get enough of her accent when she talked. Her best friend at school said it was because she sounded like Luna Lovegood, the crazy blond girl in the Harry Potter movies. When she answered a teacher ‘yes’ it sounded like ‘yuss’ and everyone would have a good laugh. With her, mostly. Whatever. Boys were dumb. 'Just look at me, I'm nice' she often thought. All they wanted was for a girl to have great honking titties. She just wanted them to look at her and say she was beautiful too in her way. "Just look at me" she mused aloud.

With lunch about to start she could take a nice long shower and nobody would bother her for half an hour, maybe even 45 minutes if she pushed it. She usually skipped lunch anyway. The stuff in the cafeteria was too greasy for her.

“Ewwhh.” (Even her groans had a touch of lilt.) The tub seemed to be leaking. She saw now the top was open just a crack so she wiped her finger around the edge trying to clean it off before snapping the lid shut.

Instead of sealing the tub as planned she let out a breathy squeak, “what theh–!” The stuff had shocked her! She flicked her finger a few times trying to shake off the emerald booger. It hit the cream colored tile floor with a wet ‘splat!’, gleaming up at her pretty much the same color as her eyes. What kind of rubbish shampoos did they have in this country? “And that's enough of that!” she said and set the tub, still cracked open, on one of the wirework shelves hanging from the showerhead. She’d be nice and put it in lost-&-found after lunch. The blonde girl could pick it up there later if she actually cared. Reaching for the shower knobs she didn’t see the tub was still bubbling over, as if the green goo within were being filled to overflowing from some unseen pipe.

Some dipshit had turned the temp knob all the way to max, she noticed with a sigh. The next person to turn on the pressure would get a nasty fright, maybe even scalded. The school had a central boiler for all its hot water and it was blisteringly hot. Really, people had been blistered. There’d been a big stink about it last semester but they still hadn’t turned it down. Stupid grown ups. She looked at the maxed-out dial again. “Why do people have to be so mean?” she asked the little tub. She tried to be nice to everybody, but when she came across pranks like this it made her kinda mad. People said when she was really mad her freckles turned red. Had the blonde girl left it that way? Fiona though she was super-duper pretty, but she hadn’t looked like an entirely nice person.

She reached forward to correct the situation when a stream of green goo trailing down from the shelves dripped across her arm and shocked her again. As she jerked back her foot stepped in the gob on the floor from earlier and her leg shot out from under her. Wind-milling her arms she fell forward and cracked her head viciously on the tiles above the shower handles, knocking herself out. As her face slid down the wall she just missed turning on the hot water and narrowly avoided being poached like a lobster. The impact shook the shelves enough the tub flopped nearly on its side and the goo started running out even faster, still without emptying its half-open container. If she’d seen it she would have laughed– who needed a bottomless well of green slime?

Fiona rolled over as she fell and came to rest slumped in the corner almost like she had sat down there on purpose. Her head lolled to one side, hiding the red goose egg on her brow under her strawberry-blond bangs. She was directly beneath the shelves...

The green stream hit her high on her flat chest, splattering droplets across her freckled shoulders and face. The majority of it ran in a thick rivulet down her front, guided into the top of her suit by the rise of her slight breasts. Even knocked senseless her tiny nipples tightened and tented her suit as the cool goo slid between her A-cup tits and began to pool inside her suit...

Minutes passed and nobody came. The thin steam of green oozing from the self-refilling tub didn’t stop for a second so 40 minutes later Fiona had been drenched from nose to knee. Not with a handful or two. Not with the rather-more-than-but-let’s-call-it-‘a third of a bottle’ like someone else we all know (and love) used on her first encounter with the energizing gel... Both quantities sufficient to make comparisons like "uberbabe" and "superhero" apply to those so blessed. Fiona had spent almost the whole lunch break under the unending stream of green drool. Oblivious, she had three or four GALLONS of the stuff splashed over her entire body and soaking into her hair, its true power just waiting for its unique catalyst. And like any highly radioactive material, the shimmering green ENERGIZED! gel had a critical mass. If someone turned that knob before Fiona had a chance to wipe the preposterous overdose off and wash it down a sink with cold water the only words that were going to apply were "detonation" and "goddess"...

Fiona was already being reshaped by the power of the super-mega-king-sized dose of raw, cold gel she had received. She might even have woken up when the bell rang and gotten out of the still dry shower safely and managed to wipe the gobs of Energize! off without further incident, remaining simply gorgeous and just a teensy bit super-powered. But it was not to be. Two decidedly not-nice girls happened to come in to the locker rooms five minutes before the end-of-lunch bell to sneak a smoke. One spotted Fiona’s leg sticking out of the shower from their hiding place and they both came to investigate. They found the rest of Fiona still leaned up against the corner of the shower stall.

“I think she’s sleeping.” the first girl whispered. Cutting class for a nap made perfect sense to her.

“That is just too delicious. Let’s punk her.” the other answered.

“Wait, who is it? I don’t want to start none with anybody cool.”

“It’s that ditzy exchange student from second period. You know the one. Always bringing flowers to school. Fiona-something.”

“Oh, her. Yeah. I hate her. She was smiling at my boy last week. Just turn the water on. Show her what’s what.” She was not gonna miss this opportunity. The foreign girl dressed like a mouse in class, but seeing her in her swimsuit, she realized the girl had been dressing down curves easily on par with that Emma bitch. If Fiona-something put the moves on her man, it would be game over for her. Just laying there sleeping the girl had a body good enough to eat and she wasn't even lesbo. Nuh-uh.

“What’s she laying on?” It looked like she had thrown down a rumpled but shiny blanket before taking her nap. It was the same strawberry-blonde as her hair and it spread out in a circle around her that reached past her knees.

“Who cares?” the other replied, eager to do some mischief.

“I think someone beat us to it,” her co-conspirator whispered pointing at the plastic tub on the rack over the girl's head, placed perfectly to dump some green shit over the sleeping girl. Bitch was covered in the stuff. It ran down her arms, there were splatters all down her legs. She had to be sleeping hard to not have noticed all that!

There was so much it had soaked in and stained her whole suit emerald green and had flooded into her top until her boobs had to be floating in the gunk. There was so much it even leaked out the bottom of her suit between her thighs... “Ha! she’s even got it all down her crotch. Sucks to be you, girl!”

“How horrible” The other girl said with completely fake sympathy. “I’m sure she’ll want to wash that off right away.” Not even bothering to check the temperature setting, she reached over the sleeping Irish bimbo and cranked the shower wide open. Then the two girls both leaped back from the blast of steam that filled the stall.

“Goddamn! I think I burnt myself. Holy shit that’s hot.”

The other girl peered back into the cloud. “You think she’s ok?”

Realizing they could both be in BIG trouble, maybe even killed the sleeping girl, they turned and ran too fast to see the steam suddenly light up from within, filled with a rich yellow light the color of a pot of Irish Gold. Fitting, because Fiona was definitely at the end of the rainbow now.

Under the hissing spray of boiling water, Fiona bolted awake with a gasp so strong it yanked the locker room doors shut from 20 feet away. Then she hollered at the top of her now Very Big Lungs what was fast becoming the battlecry of ENERGIZED! girls everywhere:

“WOAHWOAHWOAHWOAHWOAHWOAAHHHHH!” (yes, she still had her lilt)

Her orgasmic wail was so powerful she blew the glass out of every window frame in the athletics building. Flinching students shrieked and ran as a golden fog came boiling out behind the burst of broken glass.

A tendril of the gas seemed to deliberately reach out, about to grab a cute junior from the girl’s soccer team. She'd been heading to the gym lockers to change out of her gear after an extra practice during lunch. She'd raced back and with her long legs she was well ahead of the rest of her team. She’d been knocked down as the two girls who had set things in motion bolted out of the locker room just before the door slammed shut on their heels. Tina rubbed her knee then looked up and saw the approaching curl of golden mist the color of her cornrows. Was it poison? Was she going to die? Dozens of tendrils extended from the yellow cloud surrounding the gym, they almost seemed to be stalking the frightened witnesses, but the other girls from the team all managed to scramble away thanks their slow start back from the field. Tina opened her mouth and inhaled to scream– and the stuff seemed to rush into her. She'd expected it to stink like gasoline, but instead of making her cough it tasted sweet! Now there was just the barest whiff of activated ENERGIZED! gel in her system and she felt amazing! Properly mixed with boiling water even a drop of it was enough to set her body changing. She managed to snatch another, even deeper breath and felt her whole body begin to tingle!

Just as she took a third wonderfully filling breath all the golden fumes shrank back into the girl's lockers like a movie running in reverse. There was a whistling sound as it shot back in through the ragged window frames, pulled by some incredible suction. Something inside was drawing it all in, concentrating it, soaking in it...

The giant voice from moments ago rang out again in breathy pleasure, a thick accent slurring the words, “yus... yusss... och, iad suid chiche! ...Oh yus, YUSSS, YAAHUUUSSsss!”

Tina hadn't made captain of the team by hesitating. Beneath her jersey, she could feel her former B-cups straining against the elastic band across her chest. She could feel her legs turning sleek and muscular. She knew she needed to get more of the strange steam. And besides, whatever was going on in there, it sounded like fun! She ran at the door, threw it open without breaking stride and dove into a cloud of yellow steam as the door swung shut behind her. Her teammates, not seeing how Tina's figure had already responded to the vaporized gel, called out for Tina to stop but she was gone into ground zero of the explosion.

Inside, surrounded by hot semidarkness Tina breathed deep. The locker room had become a magical sauna. It felt luxurious as her lungs and steam-damp skin together gathered the equivalent of another single tiny droplet of ENERGIZE!. Without a second thought she reached under her jersey and ripped off the constriction of her sports bra so she could breath in just that much deeper... It's not like it was her size anymore. Realizing how strong she would need be to do what she'd just done, she flexed her arms. Her biceps contracted in steely coils of muscle at least two inches thick. "Wow. I am so awesome!"

Tina had no idea another person inside had already absorbed great sloshing buckets of the activated brew and was well on her way to divinity. But Tina started to have some inkling as she peered through the sweet smelling fog seeing a glow from the direction of the showers. She explored deeper into the chambers, avoiding banging her knees on the low benches by memory. When she turned the final corner she found the source of the light and froze. It came from a blazing golden corona around the most shapely, the most big-breasted girl she'd ever seen in real life. And she had a wide, full ass like no white girl ever. Boo-fucking-tey. Tina had great hips, but she felt like a skinny little boy compared to the vision before her...

Tina clung to the corner of the stall, her beaded braids whipped forward around her head as the other teenager inhaled deeply with her eyes closed, her fingers stiff and pointed at the floor... Her chest rose like twin moons as she drank in cubic yards of the golden steam. The meaty swells under her swimsuit, as firm and spherical as planets, rose still higher first as she went up on the balls of her feet and again as the latest infusion of ENERGIZE! lifted her bodily into the air, her long toes hanging inches above the tiled floor. The golden steam orbited around her in ragged clouds. The teen goddess glowed like a newborn star in the center of a nebula. (What? Tina has a 'thing' about stars. She'd had gotten an 'A' in astronomy last semester. Taking her boyfriend out the night after the finals to show him all the stars she knew the names of had been the start of some really great sex...)

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Tina was yanked forward by the wind of the girls next inhalation, landing at the girl's adorably cute feet. Tina stood up gasping, trying to claim the tiniest bit more of the golden steam for herself, but it was like trying to sip from the edge of a fire hose as another torrent of steam was sucked down what looked like a tornado pointed at the other girl's lush wet lips. There wasn't a mark or blemish anywhere on her fair skin that Tina could see, except for the cute freckles dusted across the tops of her breasts, feet, and cheeks. The girl hung taut in the air like the figurehead of a ship - her arms and legs thrown back wide, back arched, her chin lifted to the sky and pointing the way with her heaving bosom wrapped tight in emerald green. Even the spreading outlines of her ribs were beautiful as she devoured another golden cloud.

Full almost to bursting now Fiona's gleaming green eyes snapped open, faintly glowing with the incalculable power she had absorbed. She felt like she had eaten a hydrogen bomb, the nuclear fires churning in her belly (which was surprisingly accurate...). Her balance felt strange. It was like she was leaning out over a soaring cliff, like the last moment your toes hung over the edge of the high-dive platform as you leapt. She loved to dive. The feeling of being alone far above the audience as they stared up expectantly, every breath held. Before she could realize she was not touching the floor anymore she was startled by a pixie-cute black girl with really great boobs standing right in front of her, staring at her with rapture and slowly changing too (dosed with maybe a ten-thousandth of the gel-energy that had saturated every cell in Fiona's body...). The girl looked like a nice person. She had kind eyes. Fiona smiled. "Good for youhh..." and the super-concentrated ENERGIZE! steam in her lungs washed over the other girl, easily multiplying the amount Tina had absorbed ten-fold. Equivalent to a single good handful at last.

“WOAHWOAHWOAHWOAHWOAHWOA” All in a rush Tina grew lovely and buxom and strong before both their eyes. Her hair cascaded to the middle of her back, two-tone as her natural raven tresses grew in behind the bleached braids at their tips. Even her loose soccer jersey could contain the swelling of her globes no more and the sides split revealing the toned muscle of her rich caramel flanks. Transformed by a single breath of the divine. And then this stunning athletic girl no one would ever ignore looked at Fiona, really looked at her and whispered "you're so beautiful..."

"I am?"

Tina didn't know why, but it was like what she said had pulled the pin on an grenade. 'How could she not know she was beautiful? Girl was a fucking goddess!' Fiona's long graceful fingers slid inside her suit, timid exploration that swiftly became wanton caressing. She started to shake, her eyes rolling back in her skull. Fiona's back arched again, thrusting those vast creamy mounds into Tina's face and she felt such softness on her cheeks, like pushing her face into the most beautiful down-feather comforter... until Fiona's questing hands mashed her super-tits hard against each other and Tina was thrown head-first out of the showers with a comical 'pop!' by Fiona's titanic cleavage. Tina looked up from the floor, laughing. "Ok, star-girl's really getting into It now!" she observed, thinking out loud.

Unbound from gravity, Fiona's knees lifted to scrape against each other in a slow circle, drawing together her long, magnificently full thighs. The powerful flexing of her inner thighs revealed cords of muscle larger and harder than even Tina's formidable energized biceps. The clash of those swelling cables in turn applying forces that could crack diamonds like they were walnuts as they twisted and compressed Fiona's virgin loins. Oh, what those stupid boys had missed! Instead of being crushed her outer labia swelled larger with the rush of hot blood pumping into her groin – all perfectly framed by the inverted green triangle of her high-cut swimsuit . Soon her broad hips joined in the rolling, grinding dance and the blossoming goddess' breathy grunting grew louder. Tina let loose an echoing womanly moan of her own, unashamed her hand had fallen to finger herself before the sexual spectacle of Fiona's self-discovery.

Outside, still in shock from the explosion that heralded the strange cloud, people could feel pulsing concussions roll through the air, rattling in their chests like the biggest and best fireworks. "huh... huh... huh... huhh... huhh... None imagined the rhythm pounding their bodies were the gradually deepening breaths of a sexually inexperienced supergirl.

In her mind's eye Tina saw the spoon of the grenade she had unleashed go flying away and she had the premonition she should run before the grenade counted to three. When that star exploded it was gonna be a supernova... With all the power of her now fully Energized! muscles, Tina threw herself behind a bank of lockers, dust raining down as the concrete supports along the ceiling flexed in time with the breathy cries coming from the showers...

As glorious as she felt, her whole super-body thrumming with the erogenous echoes of her touch, a part of Fiona was becoming frustrated. Why hadn't she cum? The sensations surging through her... she should have cum a hundred times. She should have died cumming with a stupid grin on her face. It was as if her body was too Energized! to have ordinary orgasms... Well, she'd just have to try harder! "huh... Huh... Huhh... Huuhhh... Huhhh! Huhh!! HUH!! HHUUUUHH!"

The pulses shaking in the air became deeper, fuller, a SEISMIC force causing small earthquakes to roll across the campus (It's LA, all the kids were pretty used to those). Tina's frightened and crying teammates were certain their friend inside was dead when some kind of missile shot out of the building blowing a huge hole in the roof. A strawberries-and-cream silhouette ascended amid the shower of debris in front of the entire student body as by now everyone in school had gathered to see the excitement. A plume of golden steam rose four stories into the sky in the figure's wake, smeared sideways by the breeze. At the top of the plume the figure resolved into a pale, devastatingly beautiful girl in an emerald-green one-piece, her shining red-gold hair steaming out behind her long enough to come down to her ankles. She seemed oblivious to the fact she was outdoors and in plain view as she fondled herself before all her classmates, chasing a climax that just wouldn't come.

No one could look away from Fiona (would you?). Every girl in school blushed: both her hands were feverishly groping her epically MASSIVE chest while those long shapely legs were scissoring wide and then shut and wide again. Even her toes filled her captivated female audience with simmering excitement as they kneaded the air, alternatingly stretched and curled with her rising ecstasy. Every one of them wished they were her at that moment. Her head snapped from side to side, shaking her hair like a flag. The building earthquake stopped as her heaving chest stilled and her moist pink lips formed a perfect silent ‘o’... Fiona shuddered, her mind slipping in and out of a swirling white blank, out of control, genuinely overwhelmed by her MEGA-ENERGIZED! body's almost unlimited capacity for sexual stimulation. It just kept building inside her! She kept rubbing and it felt soo goodhh! Why couldn't she just cum already?! A chorus of feminine groans rose up around her: she was far from being the only girl at school wanting sexual release.

"Ohhh! ...fuuuk dom! ...hhhhhaaahhh..." Eyes squeezed shut, Fiona tried to keep it in, to not embarrass anyone who might be able to hear her hiding in the showers, unaware that even her faintest whimpers echoed across the school now. If people knew she had touched herself so... she'd be mortified. Little did she know the 'girl-radar' of a hundred or more boys who had ignored her that very morning had locked on to the once slender Irish student flying over them! Mastering herself for a moment she opened her eyes... She wasn't in the girl's showers anymore, was she? Where was... Oh!... She was flying! Below her boys and men were driven to their knees by the aching in their pants. Dozens of girls were swooning, hands on their bodies in a feeble imitation of her glory. She felt a deep flash of embarrassment but it was nothing compared to the deeper arousal that rocketed through her. 'Yes...' she thought. 'they're finally looking at me. At. Me. Everyone is looking at meeee!!' It was a fetish so secret even she didn't know. Until now.

She started to both cum and rise through the air, the two entwined so it felt like it would never stop. Her self-fondling became faster and more frantic as her exhibitionism-fueled orgasm refused to release her, her body beyond all exhaustion now that her climax had begun. By the time she was 10 stories up she was becoming a blur. Tufts of emerald cloth rained down when even the energized! fabric of her suit tore to pieces under her exploring fingers as she dared what she had never done before and penetrated herself. The impossible crescendo multiplied as she began to finger-fuck herself relentlessly, buck-naked and loving it! "LOOK AT MEEE!!" she cried out. Everywhere below her girls blacked out, overcome with sympathetic spasms, the tiniest echo of her joy flattening them to the ground. The sun gleaming off her perfect limbs and breasts burning pornographic afterimages into the eyes of the army of boys straining to see her. The wetly gleaming blur rose higher, became a dot, and then was gone... Leaving behind only a final thundering “YUUUSSS!” that set off every car alarm in Pasadena and rattled windows across the whole LA basin.

The Goddess Fiona — always enjoying a good pun — had truly 'ascended'.

Then, as if to remind her worshipers of all of their earthly concerns, the walls of girl’s locker room caved in. The braver students, male and female alike, rushed forward hoping to help anyone trapped inside (and maybe a to get a bit of that golden steam action for themselves...). But they were too late, the cloud had already dispersed. It seemed the locker rooms may have been empty after all except for, well, you know, her.

The school disaster drill took hours to sort everybody out. News choppers arrived too late to film Fiona's grand departure, circling the site of what the evening news proposed may have been a terrorist chemical attack. Likely involving a powerful hallucinogen considering the confused stories dreamy-eyed students told the eager reporters about a golden cloud (and other graphic details quickly cut from the broadcast...). While some people had been cut by flying glass there were thankfully no serious injuries. Many of the male students had to be treated for mild dehydration for reasons they were reluctant to talk about with paramedics. Despite the extensive damage to the gymnasium only two students were noted as missing. The news cycle continued with more rescue crews gathering at the scene until after sunset when Tina awoke, stretched out under the rubble, and casually flipped a multi-ton chunk of roof off herself. Digging teams were relived to discover not only was the missing Junior not dead, the soccer player had a very promising future ahead of her as a international model or living bulldozer, depending on her mood. The cameras couldn't get enough of her until one medic sensing her discomfort wrapped her in a blanket and drove her home (she was rather obviously unhurt).

Of sweet, smiling Fiona Dunleavy, there was no trace. When the school called the folks who were her guardians while she stayed in the states to confirm she'd been at school today, the couple promised that while she had attended, she was home safe, and yes her parents already knew (neglecting to mention Fiona had told her parents in Ireland in person that she was quite a bit more than ok and flown back already...).

They also told the teachers Fiona had had quite a flight- er, fright rather- and might not come to school for the next few days. But when she did... well, that is another story. (This one is about the tub, remember?)

- - -

And what of the tub? As Fiona launched on a multi-megaton blast of pleasure that made it very hard to remember her own name much less why she had thought she should be embarrassedhh (yup, she still has that breathy lilt boys adored), the little tub and its bubbling green contents got caught in her silken mane, hooked by one of the bands that held her pigtails in place. It was dragged along unnoticed as she climbed. By a quarter mile up her hyper-foundling had turned her long hair into a supersonic whip. With a crack the forgotten tub shook loose and went sailing at Mach 1.3 out over the ocean where it finally splashed down many miles out to sea. The scorched and melted plastic shattered on impact releasing the emerald globule within. Which promptly dissolved in the cold saltwater with a hissing, sputtering ‘pop!’ And that, as Fiona had said, was enough of that!

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