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Kneel before Roz

16 Jul 2018 03:55 #60173 by Dru1076
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Kneel before Roz is a story I wrote a long time ago. Its about a mean super powered bully, basically. If there's enough interest, I'll clean up and post more. But i know most SWManiacs find super powered bullies distasteful, including most of my friends. So I might just privately share it with those who actually want to read it rather than put stuff in the library most people dont want to read.
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16 Jul 2018 04:41 #60174 by freeLancer
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I am a long time fan of your bullies and bad girls. Don't find it distasteful at all. I recall reading this some time ago and hoping for more. So thanks for looking into continuing the story. 

Btw mob girl, not the one and stealing from a thief are some of my top favorites. Awesome writing!!!
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16 Jul 2018 09:01 - 16 Jul 2018 09:02 #60176 by koopa
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Nothing’s wrong about a mean supergirl! 
Would love to read that story!
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16 Jul 2018 09:34 #60177 by mcinvictus
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The meaner the better as far as i am concerned
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16 Jul 2018 13:45 - 16 Jul 2018 13:45 #60179 by Dru1076
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I should probably do something about improving the dialogue a bit...but for those who can stomach it, here's an extended version of the scene from Roz's rampage. This is one my earliest stories most of which I never typed up. It's in a notebook written in biro it's so old. www.deviantart.com/dru1076/art/Kneel-Before-Roz-1-754777881  
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16 Jul 2018 18:14 #60182 by Hidden_78
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Yeah I agree with what's been said, the meaner the better for me too, I'd even be keen to see you step it up a notch!  Your stories are exactly what I'm into and the reason I found myself here.  You can't please everyone, but don'y let that put you off!  Keep up the good work!
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16 Jul 2018 23:16 #60184 by Kamelmann
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Absolutely adored the story. Super powered, mean bully? Hell yes. Please do more Dru. 
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17 Jul 2018 05:09 #60188 by SCOTT R
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You really really poured it on with this release Dru, FANTASTIC!!! An arrogant, out of control she-demon more powerful than any army. What a kickass wonderful combination.

One thing I got a hoot out of was her repeatedly going into her 10-20 sentence long spiels about how great she was and how she was going to destroy them with her body and all the doomed victims could respond with were one liners like " Go home and sleep it off" or " What's going on here?" HAHAHAHAHA. 

Dru....... your work is always beautiful, but you really hit the mother-lode with this baby!
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18 Jul 2018 05:12 #60205 by wedgeinator
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I found it a great story and I always enjoy a mean super girl I find her more attractive and more realistic I mean people abuse what little power the have now if they were invincible it's only a matter of time before they take advantage of that. 
Long story short I enjoyed it and hope you keep the mean super bullies coming.
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19 Jul 2018 01:41 #60218 by steelknight3000
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That was good, I like her shitty attitude and how she brags about her muscles and strength but I would cut out the f-- words.
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19 Jul 2018 02:15 - 19 Jul 2018 03:35 #60220 by Dru1076
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I would say the response I've had certainly qualifies as "enough interest" so the next part will be published in the library. I think the readers offended by this type of story know by now to avoid Roz. To thank you for encouraging me, all replies to this thread have been sent a link to a preview of Roz pt 2. Check your PM's. And anyine who wants a link but hasnt got one can drop me a line here or send me a PM. I will hook you up.  And sorry Steelknight...but the cussing stays. It's part of the package with Roz. 
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19 Jul 2018 09:48 #60222 by SHTL
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 Please go on! I really liked part 1!
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19 Jul 2018 09:54 #60223 by SHTL
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Please send me the link.
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19 Jul 2018 11:22 #60224 by ChaozCloud
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Yes please on part 2 :)
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20 Jul 2018 02:09 #60250 by barber
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Dru, I'm subscribing to the Roz newsletter
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20 Jul 2018 04:20 #60253 by cchjcj2
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Best story in a long while! 
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20 Jul 2018 08:16 #60254 by TheRo
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I'd also like one Roz please. 
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20 Jul 2018 16:28 #60263 by RD
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I think you're figuring out who your fans are. It would be great to see Part 2.
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20 Jul 2018 21:17 #60267 by ballen
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Yeah, count me in on the Roz party.
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22 Jul 2018 02:10 - 22 Jul 2018 04:47 #60279 by steelknight3000
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Dru1076 wrote: I would say the response I've had certainly qualifies as "enough interest" so the next part will be published in the library. I think the readers offended by this type of story know by now to avoid Roz. To thank you for encouraging me, all replies to this thread have been sent a link to a preview of Roz pt 2. Check your PM's. And anyine who wants a link but hasnt got one can drop me a line here or send me a PM. I will hook you up.  And sorry Steelknight...but the cussing stays. It's part of the package with Roz. 


I was actually talking about the gay slur
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22 Jul 2018 04:52 - 22 Jul 2018 04:54 #60282 by Dru1076
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steelknight3000 wrote:

Dru1076 wrote: I would say the response I've had certainly qualifies as "enough interest" so the next part will be published in the library. I think the readers offended by this type of story know by now to avoid Roz. To thank you for encouraging me, all replies to this thread have been sent a link to a preview of Roz pt 2. Check your PM's. And anyine who wants a link but hasnt got one can drop me a line here or send me a PM. I will hook you up.  And sorry Steelknight...but the cussing stays. It's part of the package with Roz. 


I was actually talking about the gay slur


Suprising. Thats not what i think of when someone tells me they found the f word offensive. But my reply would be the same.

Its vulgar, and its deeply offensive. Thats WHY i used it. Its character appropriate, and honestly not the worst thing about this story.
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22 Jul 2018 04:59 #60283 by Dru1076
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The rest of Part 1 is up, along with part 2. 

Those who read the preview I sent out will still find a pleasant surprise at the end. 

Part 2, too large for a single posting on DA, had to split in two but is available there also. 

www.deviantart.com/dru1076/art/Kneel-Before-Roz-2-755679133

www.deviantart.com/dru1076/art/Kneel-Before-Roz-2-5-755680162
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24 Jul 2018 00:38 #60320 by steelknight3000
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Just read the rest, great stuff.

Love how ridiculously huge and obscenely powerful she gets and her creative use of her strength (super breath, flexing shockwaves, super spitting, the finger flick). I like how she gains literally TONS of muscle and just crushes everything with her footsteps.
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26 Jul 2018 03:46 #60350 by Dru1076
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steelknight3000 wrote: Just read the rest, great stuff.

Love how ridiculously huge and obscenely powerful she gets and her creative use of her strength (super breath, flexing shockwaves, super spitting, the finger flick). I like how she gains literally TONS of muscle and just crushes everything with her footsteps.


Thanks for the feedback, mate. Roz is having a great time with her insane powers...though nobody else is. I have six more parts in the wings near ready, and wjll be rolling them out over the next month or so. Next part is ready to go, and will be in the library on the weekend. 
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28 Jul 2018 19:26 #60403 by WLG
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Dru1076 wrote: Kneel before Roz is a story I wrote a long time ago. Its about a mean super powered bully, basically. If there's enough interest, I'll clean up and post more. But i know most SWManiacs find super powered bullies distasteful, including most of my friends. So I might just privately share it with those who actually want to read it rather than put stuff in the library most people dont want to read.


Love it, love it, love it!

Such a turn-on! 

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