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SuperheroineStories.com
For anyone interested, I have moved all my stories from www.superheroines.net/blog to a new website at:
www.superheroinestories.com
The reason for doing this?
I don't know really - I guess that it always felt a little weird having a bunch of stories on the main blog. It never felt 100% right. And so I setup a new website designed specifically for the publishing of these ideas.
I'll let you know when I update it with the latest installment in the "A New Supergirl" series.
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Hmm.
Should do because I have everything turned on.
I'll look into it.
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if you need any help let me know.
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It does contain adult content, so be warned.
But it also explores James's fascination with Jodie's strength, and the power dynamic that exists between the two of them, and what happens when James experiences Supergirl's raw strength first-hand.
Hope you enjoy!
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For anyone interested, I just published Day 13 on superheroinestories.com .
On Day 13, Jodie 'comes out' to James and tells him her secret - that she is the new Supergirl.
I hope you like it. I've got a million half-written chapters here. Its just hard to finish them as I come up with a new 'Day' pretty quickly and want to scribble it down. Oh well!
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All those great inter-personal dynamics create a great framework for demonstrating how hot she is, and how hot their passion is for each other. Fun read!
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The best description of a throatlift I ever read, I you really manage to describe the psychologie of each of the character!
I would have like to write this myself
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Quick message to say that I have updated SuperheroinesStories.com with a new chapter: A New Supergirl - Day 160
So this is set about 5 months since Jodie was transformed into Supergirl, and in this chapter I wanted to describe how Jodie has progressed from a relatively shy girl into this beautiful but slightly arrogant heroine.
I really wanted to write about super breath in this chapter. I've given it a shot, but I still don't think I've nailed it and I'm REALLY happy to receive advice on how to rewrite that section to really capture how Supergirl goes from blowing cigarette gently to invoking her super breath.
I really mean it - I'm open to suggestions on how to rewrite this part.
Let me know if you enjoy it.
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Hated the cigarette but I know it has no influence on her.
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I've actually rewritten part of the story - the super breath scene, and the final 4 paragraphs. I realised that I hadn't really explained why Supergirl was now vulnerable to attack. Plus, I know that people are really into super breath and I wanted to get across that her blowing Spider across the room was so utterly easy it was like blowing out a birthday candle.
With the cigarette stuff, they're not my thing either, but the reason I put it in there was to bring out that feeling of power that she felt over those men. Here she is, an eighteen year old girl facing down these big dudes, all full of attitude, etc, etc and she toys with them, whilst completely wiping one of them out using just her breath!
And yeah, Sarge, you like that 'without a care in the world' attitude? I think thats my favourite thing about this character.
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It is Emily's first night out as Supergirl in her Supergirl costume. She is anxious, a little scared, and feels completely out of her depth. But she has a duty as the Maid of Might, and so when called upon she has to spring into action.
superheroinestories.com/a-new-supergirl-day-8/
Hope you enjoy!
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www.superwomenmania.com/index.php?option...&catid=44&Itemid=195
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JonX wrote: Day 8 of A New Supergirl is finally here!
PS - Would it be possible for an Admin to move this Topic into the following forum?
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www.superwomenmania.com/index.php?option...&catid=44&Itemid=195
Done.
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