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Short comic on DA

22 Jan 2020 14:08 #66531 by njae
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Well, I've been tinkering around with DAZ and reworked an old quick-and-dirty image series into a short comic.

It can be found here: www.deviantart.com/njae2/gallery/71974333/kellie-s-ascension

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23 Jan 2020 22:07 #66573 by lfan
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njae wrote: Well, I've been tinkering around with DAZ and reworked an old quick-and-dirty image series into a short comic.

It can be found here: www.deviantart.com/njae2/gallery/71974333/kellie-s-ascension


Nice little short, Njae!  I'll send you a PM on DA regarding specific comments....

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24 Jan 2020 09:57 #66585 by njae
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lfan wrote:

njae wrote: Well, I've been tinkering around with DAZ and reworked an old quick-and-dirty image series into a short comic.

It can be found here: www.deviantart.com/njae2/gallery/71974333/kellie-s-ascension


Nice little short, Njae!  I'll send you a PM on DA regarding specific comments....

ElF


Thanks for the feedback. As mentioned in my reply (and for everybody else), you could have posted it here as well. I am not very picky about how feedback reaches me. I appreciate it in any form.

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24 Jan 2020 18:07 #66598 by Woodclaw
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I think that my favorite moment is page 5. The shift between the three "feet shot" in the shower and the final moment on the couch really work in creating expectations.

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24 Jan 2020 18:18 #66599 by Agent00Soul
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Reminds me of the version of G-Girl's origin from "My Super Ex" that I would have preferred to see!

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24 Jan 2020 19:53 #66600 by njae
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Agent00Soul wrote: Reminds me of the version of G-Girl's origin from "My Super Ex" that I would have preferred to see!


Well I think it's pretty obvious I liked that particular scene and used it as inspiration. It felt like a love-letter to this community and was pure fanservice considering not all the cosmetic changes were seen in adult Jenny.

The original version was also a lot closer to the scene from the movie, but I moved the good part to her apartment so it would be better visible. Ironically it's the fact that a lot is still left to the imagination that adds to the charm.

I actually made an animated version of her transformation but that's hard to integrate into the comic of course.

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24 Jan 2020 22:06 #66604 by Agent00Soul
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It's an excellent piece of fan service!  Actually so is "Super Ex".  It's a mediocre film on it's own but pushes all the right buttons for this particular community.

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24 Jan 2020 22:28 #66605 by Gincognifo
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Cool little origin story with some very nice effects.

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25 Jan 2020 05:26 #66608 by shadar
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Agent00Soul wrote: It's an excellent piece of fan service!  Actually so is "Super Ex".  It's a mediocre film on it's own but pushes all the right buttons for this particular community.


My thoughts on Super-Ex exactly. If you aren't into our genre, the movie kind of sucks. But if you are, its wildly fun and completely on-message in terms of fan-service. .

By the way, Hancock, especially the extended Director's version, is similar in that way. 

It's almost amazing that they got made, because subsequent movies, even ones that technically are much better,  haven't done fan-service nearly as well. 

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25 Jan 2020 22:04 #66616 by njae
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shadar wrote:

Agent00Soul wrote: It's an excellent piece of fan service!  Actually so is "Super Ex".  It's a mediocre film on it's own but pushes all the right buttons for this particular community.


My thoughts on Super-Ex exactly. If you aren't into our genre, the movie kind of sucks. But if you are, its wildly fun and completely on-message in terms of fan-service. .

By the way, Hancock, especially the extended Director's version, is similar in that way. 

It's almost amazing that they got made, because subsequent movies, even ones that technically are much better,  haven't done fan-service nearly as well. 

Shadar


While that movie inspired the scene, I don't think it should be the main topic of discussion here. And Hancock really is getting off-topic.

I was a bit surprised when someone commented on DA for Kellie go better visit her best friend rather than her crush. Who would have thought?

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25 Jan 2020 23:10 #66618 by barber
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So glad to see Blind up on your DA. Bad Becky is one of my favorite characters ever.

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26 Jan 2020 17:24 #66629 by njae
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barber wrote: So glad to see Blind up on your DA. Bad Becky is one of my favorite characters ever.


Oh that? Well I was a bit overenthusiastc when I put up the comic so I decided to put this back up for the time being. But don't expect more reposts, I spent most of the week resisting the temptation to pull that one again.

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26 Jan 2020 17:45 #66630 by Woodclaw
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njae wrote:

barber wrote: So glad to see Blind up on your DA. Bad Becky is one of my favorite characters ever.


Oh that? Well I was a bit overenthusiastc when I put up the comic so I decided to put this back up for the time being. But don't expect more reposts, I spent most of the week resisting the temptation to pull that one again.


This is really one of those things I don't understand about you. Blind Date was, in my opinion, a really solid work, which had the added bonus of including a pretty unusual main character. Becky was a really nasty piece of work but, opposite to so many others, she had redeeming qualities.

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26 Jan 2020 19:32 #66635 by njae
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Woodclaw wrote: This is really one of those things I don't understand about you. Blind Date was, in my opinion, a really solid work, which had the added bonus of including a pretty unusual main character. Becky was a really nasty piece of work but, opposite to so many others, she had redeeming qualities.


The problem is not the story, but it's history. That's why I only posted the light version on DA.

And now back to topic.

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