Amount

New Aurora Universe story

23 Nov 2008 05:24 #14208 by shadar
New Aurora Universe story was created by shadar
I'm renamed the Hard and Soft series to Mythos, and added two new parts to the story. Lots of action of the ubergirl kind and embedded illustrations.

The story presumes that the Velorians have been hiding on Earth for a very long time. During that time, they've assumed control of graphic novel publishing and a large swath of the movie industry, and are cranking out superhero-type movies as fast as they can to create a collective mythos about imaginary super-beings.

The idea is to use that fiction to prepare Earth for the day when the Velorians have to reveal themselves.

That day that fiction becomes reality has arrived... and now the humans can only hope they'll survive it!

velorian.org/auow/mythos_part1.htm
velorian.org/auow/mythos_part2.htm

Here are the two new parts:

velorian.org/auow/mythos_part3.htm
velorian.org/auow/mythos_part4.htm

Enjoy...

Shadar

Please Log in or Create an account to join the conversation.

  • shadar
  • shadar's Avatar Topic Author
  • Online
  • Legend of SWM
  • Legend of SWM
More
23 Nov 2008 05:27 #14209 by oogber
Replied by oogber on topic New Aurora Universe story
This post just made my day... will click links now

Please Log in or Create an account to join the conversation.

More
23 Nov 2008 22:25 #14217 by sgfan05
Replied by sgfan05 on topic New Aurora Universe story
Yikes is all I'm going to say

Please Log in or Create an account to join the conversation.

More
24 Nov 2008 08:25 #14218 by shadar
Replied by shadar on topic New Aurora Universe story
Is Yikes a good or bad thing?

Shadar

Please Log in or Create an account to join the conversation.

  • shadar
  • shadar's Avatar Topic Author
  • Online
  • Legend of SWM
  • Legend of SWM
More
24 Nov 2008 17:00 #14220 by angels
Replied by angels on topic New Aurora Universe story
From the 3/4 parts I've read so far, I'd say it's a GREAT "yikes".!

I've been a fan for years, Shadar. Your writing just keeps getting better!

Please Log in or Create an account to join the conversation.

More
24 Nov 2008 19:17 #14222 by sgfan05
Replied by sgfan05 on topic New Aurora Universe story

From the 3/4 parts I've read so far, I'd say it's a GREAT "yikes".!


That was my intention. Although I hope you keep the story going Shadar, I hate chilfhangers :D

Please Log in or Create an account to join the conversation.

More
24 Nov 2008 19:30 #14223 by Random321
Replied by Random321 on topic New Aurora Universe story
Very nice set of stories Shadar. Solid characters and development hope it keeps going.

I'll always enjoy a good “blast door tear open.”

<Spoiler>
Just a shame Charlize has been micro waved to ~ death? Fantastic description of that scene even if it was a bit disturbing.

<Note to self> If it starts hurting don’t just hang around acting conceited waiting for your blood to vaporize inside you ~ get out of range/dodge.

Project Super Woman
SFX Laden Video Shorts and Digital Comics Featuring Super Heroines
www.projectsuperwoman.com

Home of Mindy Marvel, Super Michaela, Domina, E-Girl, Bionica, Power Play, Amp, Superheroines & Super Villains.

Please Log in or Create an account to join the conversation.

  • Random321
  • Random321's Avatar
  • Away
  • Uberposter
  • Uberposter
  • Project Super Woman
More
26 Nov 2008 20:19 #14234 by shadar
Replied by shadar on topic New Aurora Universe story

From the 3/4 parts I've read so far, I'd say it's a GREAT "yikes".!


That was my intention. Although I hope you keep the story going Shadar, I hate chilfhangers :D


No cliffhanger this time... Part 5 is underway. I really want to finish this one in style.

Shadar

Please Log in or Create an account to join the conversation.

  • shadar
  • shadar's Avatar Topic Author
  • Online
  • Legend of SWM
  • Legend of SWM
More
26 Nov 2008 20:25 #14235 by shadar
Replied by shadar on topic New Aurora Universe story

Very nice set of stories Shadar. Solid characters and development hope it keeps going.

I'll always enjoy a good “blast door tear open.”

<Spoiler>
Just a shame Charlize has been micro waved to ~ death? Fantastic description of that scene even if it was a bit disturbing.

<Note to self> If it starts hurting don’t just hang around acting conceited waiting for your blood to vaporize inside you ~ get out of range/dodge.


Good point... Charlize was so convinced of her invulnerability that she just stood there and took it, even after it would have become apparent to anyone else that she was facing real danger.

While we humans are very aware of our frailty, at least when it comes to facing weapons or superfemales of the lethal variety, Velorian Protectors are raised from an early age to be confident and fearless. Charlize was too young and inexperienced to have learned that all humans, even superhumans like herself, aren't truly gods.

They might look like a goddess and often behave like one, but underneath all that superstrength and steely physique, their genetic foundation is as human as you and me.

Shadar

Please Log in or Create an account to join the conversation.

  • shadar
  • shadar's Avatar Topic Author
  • Online
  • Legend of SWM
  • Legend of SWM
More
27 Nov 2008 04:15 #14237 by Random321
Replied by Random321 on topic New Aurora Universe story
So ~ is she really done for? I wondered if you left it open with her legs still there? :D

Project Super Woman
SFX Laden Video Shorts and Digital Comics Featuring Super Heroines
www.projectsuperwoman.com

Home of Mindy Marvel, Super Michaela, Domina, E-Girl, Bionica, Power Play, Amp, Superheroines & Super Villains.

Please Log in or Create an account to join the conversation.

  • Random321
  • Random321's Avatar
  • Away
  • Uberposter
  • Uberposter
  • Project Super Woman
More
27 Nov 2008 07:31 #14240 by shadar
Replied by shadar on topic New Aurora Universe story

So ~ is she really done for? I wondered if you left it open with her legs still there? :D


She's gone, Random... Vels can regenerate from signfiicant injury, but not after their brains and most internal organs are turned to ash.

This is going to seriously freak out both the Velorian and Arion contingents on Earth. If the 'weapon' (they don't know that its Astrid yet) can kill an S-class Velorian, then nobody is safe.

Of course, a common fear can sometimes bring even enemies together. After they get done accusing each other of having the weaspon.

And of course, Misty knows exactly what is going on. And she's forming a temporary alliance with the Arions. But not to kill her sister. Just to find her. Her real agenda hasn't been revealed.

Shadar

Please Log in or Create an account to join the conversation.

  • shadar
  • shadar's Avatar Topic Author
  • Online
  • Legend of SWM
  • Legend of SWM
More
28 Nov 2008 04:01 #14245 by sgfan05
Replied by sgfan05 on topic New Aurora Universe story

From the 3/4 parts I've read so far, I'd say it's a GREAT "yikes".!


That was my intention. Although I hope you keep the story going Shadar, I hate chilfhangers :D


No cliffhanger this time... Part 5 is underway. I really want to finish this one in style.

Shadar


Execllent want to know what happened to L.V...I mean Kara :D

Please Log in or Create an account to join the conversation.

More
28 Nov 2008 05:35 #14246 by shadar
Replied by shadar on topic New Aurora Universe story

From the 3/4 parts I've read so far, I'd say it's a GREAT "yikes".!


That was my intention. Although I hope you keep the story going Shadar, I hate chilfhangers :D


No cliffhanger this time... Part 5 is underway. I really want to finish this one in style.

Shadar


Execllent want to know what happened to L.V...I mean Kara :D


Part 5 starts off with a focus on her...

Shadar

Please Log in or Create an account to join the conversation.

  • shadar
  • shadar's Avatar Topic Author
  • Online
  • Legend of SWM
  • Legend of SWM
More
29 Nov 2008 07:18 #14260 by shadar
Replied by shadar on topic New Aurora Universe story
I've just posted part 5 of the Mythos saga. This one isn't for the faint-hearted.

Several people indicated they wanted to see more of Kara, and I've tried to do that. In fact, you'll see Kara (Laura) as you've never seen her before.

Part 5 isn't as long as the other parts, but I figured I'd post small segments every few days instead of waiting a week or two between posts.

The previous parts:
velorian.org/auow/mythos_part1.htm
velorian.org/auow/mythos_part2.htm
velorian.org/auow/mythos_part3.htm
velorian.org/auow/mythos_part4.htm

The new part:
velorian.org/auow/mythos_part5.htm


Shadar[/b]

Please Log in or Create an account to join the conversation.

  • shadar
  • shadar's Avatar Topic Author
  • Online
  • Legend of SWM
  • Legend of SWM
More
27 Aug 2010 09:01 #20124 by oogber
Replied by oogber on topic New Aurora Universe story
2 year bump :)

Please Log in or Create an account to join the conversation.

More
09 Sep 2010 12:44 #20248 by shadar
Replied by shadar on topic New Aurora Universe story
I got the bump...I've got some ideas to continue this story and bring it to an exciting climax. Just have to get focused...

Shadar

Please Log in or Create an account to join the conversation.

  • shadar
  • shadar's Avatar Topic Author
  • Online
  • Legend of SWM
  • Legend of SWM
More
Time to create page: 0.115 seconds