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09 Oct 2016 01:32 #50593 by erikphandel

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I would love to have a more detailed critique. Whenever you can, please do!

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09 Oct 2016 22:22 #50608 by erikphandel

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erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/Lust-desire-and-greed-638408051 new chapter up! Please give me some feedback. Do you prefer short or longer stories? Been writing a lot shorter lately

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02 Dec 2016 18:53 #51501 by erikphandel

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erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/Worship-648877091 new chapter is up on my DA! Also it would really help if you guys answer the question in my profile page

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02 Dec 2016 20:25 #51505 by AuGoose

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Repeated applications of Mike enhance the core power set. One has to wonder if repeated applications of Henry enhance whatever he gave them or start triggering additional abilities. Depth vs. breadth.

Fun stuff. Looking forward to more. I might prefer slightly longer, but I know that itch to publish something good instead of drag it out hoping for something perfect...

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02 Dec 2016 22:08 #51507 by erikphandel

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AuGoose wrote: Repeated applications of Mike enhance the core power set. One has to wonder if repeated applications of Henry enhance whatever he gave them or start triggering additional abilities. Depth vs. breadth.

Fun stuff. Looking forward to more. I might prefer slightly longer, but I know that itch to publish something good instead of drag it out hoping for something perfect...

This one was supposed to be a way longer story, but since I haven't plublished anything in a while, I decided to publish it as soon as I got a good ending. But since all my stories have three or four sequences, in the end it's only one big story with several chapters

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02 Dec 2016 22:53 #51509 by Woodclaw

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AuGoose wrote: Repeated applications of Mike enhance the core power set. One has to wonder if repeated applications of Henry enhance whatever he gave them or start triggering additional abilities. Depth vs. breadth.

I think this might be a pretty good frame of reference for future installments and to create an interesting level of asymmetry between the characters, allowing for a more varied interplay.

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27 Jan 2017 19:50 #52297 by erikphandel

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New chapter out. Sorry for the delay, and I hope you enjoy it!

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16 Feb 2017 18:00 - 16 Feb 2017 18:46 #52582 by AuGoose

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Well, I for one welcome our new Lauren Overlord

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16 Feb 2017 18:06 #52583 by erikphandel

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Oh shit now this is so awesome <3 Thanks a lot AuGoose I really appreciate it

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17 Feb 2017 01:49 #52589 by ong76win2

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Wow! Great series! Be waiting for more!

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17 Feb 2017 19:40 #52615 by Revan

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Now let's hope Goose's creation inspired you to write a new chapter as soon as you possibly can manage

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05 Mar 2017 21:44 #52995 by erikphandel

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New chapter is up erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/Absolution-608766448

If you want to see the full extent of Lauren's powers, this is the chapter. Hope you guys enjoy it!

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12 Apr 2017 22:06 #53609 by erikphandel

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New chapter up at erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/High-School-Drama-633931800

Expect a really different pace on the story, but it's only on this one. I'm planning lot's of superheroine fighting on the next one

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25 Apr 2017 11:34 #53789 by AuGoose

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Just got a chance to read this one. Good fun!

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25 Apr 2017 23:55 #53796 by slim36

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excellent, but I guess this means Brexit is still on?

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26 Apr 2017 01:52 #53797 by erikphandel

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I have no idea what you're talking about but yeah Theresa May seems pretty hellbent on Brexit tbqh

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26 Apr 2017 09:41 #53799 by ong76win2

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Great update! Hope to read more! Please do continue writing. ☺

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27 Apr 2017 11:37 #53810 by AuGoose

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erikphandel wrote: I have no idea what you're talking about but yeah Theresa May seems pretty hellbent on Brexit tbqh

I think he means the events in the previous chapter are still going on in in the background while we cut to a different part of the world.

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27 Apr 2017 14:55 #53812 by erikphandel

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Oh right

dude did I just forgot what I had written what the fuck

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17 Jun 2017 19:46 #54852 by erikphandel

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New chapter up! Getting back to the main story on the next one. Please tell me what you think of this one

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01 Sep 2017 22:23 #56088 by Pepper

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Nothing new here in a while. Hope the story hasn't run out of steam.

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01 Sep 2017 22:27 #56089 by erikphandel

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Pepper wrote: Nothing new here in a while. Hope the story hasn't run out of steam.

More like I've run out of steam :c but I'm glad to know there are people still interested. I have a lot planned out in my head, it's just a matter of typing it

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02 Sep 2017 03:45 #56090 by AuGoose

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Well I'm definitely looking forward to more. But I totally get the struggles of moving them words from brain to page :huh:

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Definitely let us know when more arrives! :woohoo:

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02 Sep 2017 11:32 #56093 by Revan

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erikphandel wrote:
Pepper wrote: Nothing new here in a while. Hope the story hasn't run out of steam.

More like I've run out of steam :c but I'm glad to know there are people still interested. I have a lot planned out in my head, it's just a matter of typing it

Definitely still interested, so let's hope you'll find your second wind!

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21 Sep 2017 18:39 #56309 by erikphandel

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New chapter up! Hope you guys enjoy it. Make sure to let me know what you think here or in the DA comments

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