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Baker's Dozen

30 Dec 2016 22:13 #51991 by Woodclaw
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I just realized (shame on me) that we never have a proper comment thread for Argo's ongoing narrative "Baker's Dozen". Since we got a nice end of the year present in the form of Chapter 11, I believe it's due time to fix this terrible shortcoming.

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31 Dec 2016 06:41 #51994 by AuGoose
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Woohoo! Bobby's back! And another FIIIINE muffin just came out of the oven :D!

(Though I admit with a crowded frat party I thought this might be the time his aim was finally off. Still, Nicole's a born force for good, isn't she? I think Kenny will manage to cope adequately with some changes around his household...)
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31 Dec 2016 08:53 - 31 Dec 2016 20:02 #51997 by Monty
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Looking forward to reading a future scene at the WWE event where Cindy and the girls may get to taunt the musclehead wrestlers in the ring after a ring stunt goes accidentally wrong, spilling into the audience ....a few scenarios running through my head with that one :)
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31 Dec 2016 18:47 #52002 by inactive
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Great installment. Looking forward to morw of Nicole, the one-woman justice league.

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01 Jan 2017 00:21 #52009 by argonaut
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Thanks for the props, guys.

AuGoose: Back when I was outlining the second half of the story, I did toy with the idea of having one of Bobby's wishes "misfire" -- by having his annoying younger sister inadvertently step into his line of sight just as he's about to use the card on another girl. But I eventually scrapped the idea. (Though I did write a dream episode in which a super-powered Amy makes Bobby's life miserable. It's in the Library as a "deleted scene.")

Although I haven't established this in the story, I've decided that in order for the card's magic to work, two conditions must be met: a direct visual "lock" on the target and intention on Bobby's part. So if another girl were to step into his line of sight while he's saying the magic words ... nothing would happen.

By the way, I've only just discovered the story you've been posting on the forum. Loving the bratty super-sister angle!

Monty: Bobby, Cindy, Darcy, and Kenny will be going to that WWE event in the next chapter. Things won't turn out exactly as you suggest, but it should be a fun night out for everyone!

GeekSeven: I'm fond of Nicole myself. Gotta love a girl who can chasten a roomful of frat boys, crush a beer keg in her bare hands, and rock a little black dress -- all at the same time. She'll return in Chapter 12, along with a few super-girls from the first half of the story.
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19 May 2017 15:54 - 19 May 2017 15:55 #54179 by smoki07
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any update soon, argonaut?
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19 May 2017 16:35 #54181 by Woodclaw
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smoki07 wrote: any update soon, argonaut?


I have on good authority that Argo and Ace are currently working on the Workshop entry so it's very likely that Baker's Dozen is currently on the back burner.

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20 May 2017 04:03 #54189 by argonaut
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Woodclaw wrote:

smoki07 wrote: any update soon, argonaut?


I have on good authority that Argo and Ace are currently working on the Workshop entry so it's very likely that Baker's Dozen is currently on the back burner.


What Woodclaw said.

Thanks for asking!

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24 May 2017 17:06 #54277 by smoki07
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Ok but I sent a suggestion about the story by PM. Please read it and tell your opinion!

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01 Sep 2017 15:14 #56079 by smoki07
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Argonaut, plz, tell me some news about a new chapter soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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09 Sep 2017 02:36 #56171 by AuGoose
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I must admit I find myself craving another muffin/bagel/carbohydrate-laden-delicious-baked-good from this batch :).

It's a simple premise that yields such a delightful array of flavors.

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09 Sep 2017 13:34 #56180 by Woodclaw
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AuGoose wrote: I must admit I find myself craving another muffin/bagel/carbohydrate-laden-delicious-baked-good from this batch :).

It's a simple premise that yields such a delightful array of flavors.


One for the wait ;)

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Today 17:09 #56696 by smoki07
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Someone did wake LaPortes thread up to get some hint/news for future of story. It worked so I'm doing the same for this story lol So UP.
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Today 18:19 - Today 18:55 #56697 by Monty
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smoki07 wrote: Someone did wake LaPortes thread up to get some hint/news for future of story. It worked so I'm doing the same for this story lol So UP.


I pm'd Argo a few weeks back about Baker's Dozen with an idea (didn't want to put it on here), but he's not replied.
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