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Bitten by the Queen

07 May 2017 20:32 - 08 Jun 2017 07:56 #53985 by lowerbase
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I'll be adding the story to the library over the course of the next weeks

It was a FMG story that evolved to Superpowered gals, and then heading to NWO events. It was supposed to be a simple brother/sister tale, but I'm think I'm unable to keep it so simple...

any commentary or questions would be greatly appreciated!
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09 May 2017 07:47 #54022 by Dru1076
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I can see how a story like this can take on a life of its own. It has all the hallmarks of a classic tale with a few new elements and ideas that have me hooked. It's tempting to ask you to hurry up, because I'm hungry for more! But stories like this are worth waiting for. :)

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15 May 2017 06:08 - 15 May 2017 06:10 #54105 by Ljin
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Together with LaPorte Caves, this is another dream come true story that pleases not only my body but also my mind. So happy I accepted the suggestion to read your story, finished the latest chapter lately on the other forum and I just can't help but to desire more and more. Will gladly read everything again through here. You really know how to handle strength, muscles and especially power and helplessness through words.

Thank you for writing and creating this story. Will gladly wait for more.
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06 Jun 2017 15:23 #54565 by lfan
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Dru1076 wrote: I can see how a story like this can take on a life of its own. It has all the hallmarks of a classic tale with a few new elements and ideas that have me hooked. It's tempting to ask you to hurry up, because I'm hungry for more! But stories like this are worth waiting for. :)


Couldn't have said it better myself, Dru! While my particular tastes in stories are fairly formula-matic, BBQ, like Circe's stories, breathes some fresh new air into the familiar tropes within our genre, exploring some new ideas as well as old favorites with excruciating (in a good way) imagery and details. Like Dru said, I'm willing to wait which is hard to do cause it's so good. Keep up the great work, lowerbase!

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07 Jun 2017 23:48 #54587 by AuGoose
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Always cool to see new and interesting catalysts. Looking forward to more with bee bites and their aftermath. :)

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