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The LaPorte Caves - Revised

08 Nov 2019 16:10 #65527 by circes_cup
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I have begun posting the revision of LPC.  This week’s installment — the Prologue through Chapter 4 —is about 28,000 words.  Future installments will be closer to 5,000 words.
For those of you that have read this story before, changes to the first part of the story are generally small in scope: trying to achieve better flow of the story and getting some key logistics right.  More fundamental changes begin in Chapter 8.
Therefore, for all but the truly devoted, these first chapters will feel almost identical to the previous version.  For those few of you who did become engrossed in the original, you will find that the changes in the first seven chapters more interesting, as they have a big impact on how thing play out later.
Whether or not you’ve seen the story before, I hope you enjoy it!
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08 Nov 2019 16:25 #65529 by ballen
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BOOM!!!

Christmas came early.  So great to have you back.  Your commitment to keeping your nose to the grindstone, persevere and finish the job is truly admirable.  Thanks my friend.  I cannot wait to dig in!
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08 Nov 2019 17:17 - 08 Nov 2019 17:19 #65531 by Monty
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Great News to make a Good Friday, Circes!
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09 Nov 2019 20:00 #65539 by jnw550
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I’m confused.  Have they been posted yet?

Everyone wants to be a beast, until it's time to do what real beasts do.

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09 Nov 2019 20:59 #65540 by circes_cup
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They’ve been submitted.  When they get posted is up to the admins. 
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09 Nov 2019 23:32 #65541 by Woodclaw
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jnw550 wrote: I’m confused.  Have they been posted yet?


Incoming in 28 minutes right now...

(formerly Anon, still Librarian)

"What is the point of having free will if one cannot occasionally spit in the eye of destiny?" ("Gentleman" John Marcone)
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10 Nov 2019 19:39 - 11 Nov 2019 00:25 #65550 by jnw550
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Already read through, it is one of my favorites after all.  The differences are subtle, but if you paid attention to the first go around, you’ll spot them.  Seeing the changes, I can understand why and that means we’re in for a ride!

i know this story isn’t centered around power and feats, but I’m curious to see if Julia will ever discover her limits?  I’m not a numbers guy, but I do like to see just how powerful a character is.  

Edit:  Better yet, if I know now it’ll ruin it.  I’d  rather be shown.

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11 Nov 2019 04:01 #65567 by Pepper
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jnw550 wrote: Already read through, it is one of my favorites after all.  The differences are subtle, but if you paid attention to the first go around, you’ll spot them.  Seeing the changes, I can understand why and that means we’re in for a ride!

I only really noticed one difference; curious, of course, what circes will do with it. There were changes I was expecting which didn't happen, and for which I'm grateful.

Looking forward to the next installment already.
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11 Nov 2019 04:20 #65568 by jnw550
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I didn’t read them side by side, so I may be remembering incorrectly.  Like you, Im curious as well.

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12 Nov 2019 18:08 #65602 by smoki07
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Glad to see the revised version. Wonder what it will give! 
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17 Nov 2019 11:45 #65643 by circes_cup
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Thanks everyone for the support!  

I’m taking a little while to post 1-4 on ALove, and then should be ready to post Ch 5 on both platforms.
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17 Nov 2019 17:31 #65646 by Monty
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Great Work Circes
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