ENERGIZE! Shower Gel (nsfw)

Monty wrote: Well, that's my tv reception knocked out by another winter storm. The last time this happened was February and I'd go home with no tv for a month or three and I started writing Energize! Will have to see where this turn of events leads me to.

Yes~

I was sure I heard a young female voice hovering above my balcony shouting "HEY! WHERE'S MY STORY?" at about three in the morning at the weekend. Then there was an almighty roar as the communal TV arial with the adjacent apartments was blown down. The neighbours are a bit pissed off, but I just shrug my shoulders...what can I do? Bloody Hell Emma!

Hi Goose - I may be able to pull something together over the holiday period. A bit of a rough outline planned to recover the mess in the lab. Will have to see what happens now I've got broadband tv and SG after Emma's little "accident".

That is Sarah's last installment winging her way to the storybank. I hope I've given her a good send off into the New Year! It's been fun writing about Sarah and Emma

I don't see it. Is it there yet?

Ch12 is now up - many thanks Woodclaw

Wow. Great update.

By the way in chapter 12, won't the car of Mark be damaged by Sarah which she is carrying with her right palm used to carry the car by its roof from the inside of the car?

Will Sarah show Mark just how powerful her boobs also by slowly crushing Mark's car using her boobs? Maybe Mark won't mind with a supergirlfriend on his side and maybe the damage already done by Sarah while carrying the car to her home?

Sharing some ideas for the next chapter if it is okay.

Thanks

Thanks ong! I think a ch12 at the end of the year was a good point to finish up. I am refreshing the previous chapters at the moment though - not revising them, just doing a bit of 'housekeeping' for Sarah and Emms.

Thanks for the reply Monty. Be waiting for more!

I've been browsing a fitness,model site in search of "muses:" for "Baker's Dozen."

This picture put me in mind of the mom in "Energize!"

Model: Darlina Brown
Caption: Argonaut

Thanks Argo! Never thought I'd see this thread "re-surface"! Here's one of Sarah re-surfacing in her mum's hot tub at the family home...
ETA Looking forward to more Baker's Dozen!

I always hoped for a continuation of this story. Especially the power up of Sarah in the last two chapters intrigued me.

njae wrote: I always hoped for a continuation of this story. Especially the power up of Sarah in the last two chapters intrigued me.

Thanks njae; It started around chapter Six Five. All credit goes to Rednecko for the transformation idea ... I would never have come up with his idea without his input. That's why the story discussions work well.

Monty wrote:

njae wrote: I always hoped for a continuation of this story. Especially the power up of Sarah in the last two chapters intrigued me.

Thanks njae; It started around chapter Six Five. All credit goes to Rednecko for the transformation idea ... I would never have come up with his idea without his input. That's why the story discussions work well.

Yeah, the discovery of new powers through the use of the ENERGIZE! gel was one of my favorite parts of this series. Unfortunately things slowed down on that front when Emma and Claire were catching up to Sarah. There were a few hints with Emma's glowing as she used the ENERGIZE in the bedroom but nothing that could be considered a new super power like Sarah's transformation. I keep wondering how the storyline with Tiffany would have worked out in the end or if Sarah and Mark could have a nice time without the latter getting hurt for once.

Well, I've been tinkering around with DaZ3d and actually made a small scene inspired by Sarah's first flight. Not too accurate to the actual chapter but I thought I might as well share.

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The pictures you have created are brilliant! Thankyou Njae!

Monty wrote: The pictures you have created are brilliant! Thankyou Njae!

You're welcome. But it is interesting how fast you can get results with Daz3d. A few years ago I tried Poser but found it a bit too hard to learn (plus a few problems with my PC). Now with DaZ3d things are way easier - and using IRAY makes it pretty clear that I should turn my back on AMD if I ever want to make a scene with background in reasonable time. The bathroom is really simple, yet each pic took several hours to render.

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You're welcome. But it is interesting how fast you can get results with Daz3d. A few years ago I tried Poser but found it a bit too hard to learn (plus a few problems with my PC). Now with DaZ3d things are way easier - and using IRAY makes it pretty clear that I should turn my back on AMD if I ever want to make a scene with background in reasonable time. The bathroom is really simple, yet each pic took several hours to render.

njae,

Nice pics, I liked this story too, wish it had continued.

I was an AMD fanboy for years, but after starting to use DAZ a couple of years ago, switched to Intel CPUs and now have 2 970 GTX for Iray. You have a nice start there, keep up the good work.

Regards,

twitch

I love the night scene landscaping in the background, it is as impressive as Sarah! I pick up Energize! every so often, but felt it was running out of steam (ouch!) towards the end. Thanks again Njae!

I've stayed loyal to AMD processors mostly because of their good prices and backwards compatibility. I even switched my broken AM3 Mainboard with an AM3+ back then, so that I could easily upgrade the processor when the time came. Of course DAZ3D is the first thing that actually uses all of these eight cores. In graphics AMD also offers more bang for the buck. Back when I bought my HD7870 I could decide between more performance or PhysX support. I took general performance. Won't happen next time.

I love the night scene landscaping in the background, it is as impressive as Sarah! I pick up Energize! every so often, but felt it was running out of steam (hehe) towards the end. Thanks again Njae!

The background was not part of DaZ3d but rather a background I had used for my futile attempts at mastering photoshop. Thankfully the render and photoshop mix well.
As for the story, I sound like a broken record if I say I'd like to see it continue. But if you think you wrote yourself into a corner, you could try to reboot the story as a new one. You wouldn't be the first author to do that and it would give us new RE-ENERGIZED stories to read.

Back in the day when Energize was rolling out, Lfan suggested an open idea for other writers to write their own versions but I wanted to keep the story "In the family" so to speak. After seeing Njae's great work and seeing still some interest in the story, if any writers want to pick up the 'bottle' and run with it, feel more than free. Goose had a splash around with the gel, and after I got over my "diva ways" (Yeah, yeah Goose, I remember my little tantrum!) ☺ I enjoyed the contribution. Anyway, the (shower) floor is open to anybody.

Monty wrote: Back in the day when Energize was rolling out, Lfan suggested an open idea for other writers to write their own versions but I wanted to keep the story "In the family" so to speak. After seeing Njae's great work and seeing still some interest in the story, if any writers want to pick up the 'bottle' and run with it, feel more than free. Goose had a splash around with the gel, and after I got over my "diva ways" (Yeah, yeah Goose, I remember my little tantrum!) ☺ I enjoyed the contribution. Anyway, the (shower) floor is open to anybody.

Now that's a really tempting idea. Part of me really wants to take you up on that offer.

So, I got an email from Emma this weekend. As you would expect, Emma doesn't mess about and can be (ahem) very forceful in her ways.

She said;
"Hey! What are you playing at? What the hell have you done with MY story? Get it sorted or I'm gonna fly over there and kick your ass!"

 

I could only reply;
Ok Emms, I'm on it...